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My arms made of steel
Riveted and stretched high into the night
The Ferris wheel turning between my shoulders
The flesh of our hips pulling against one another
Like taffy in the machine

One hundred feet below
Your heart climbs out of your chest
To watch like a child
As I swing the giant hammer
Lighting yellow bulbs
Rising up to ring the bell
To prove my strength
And win for you a snow white teddy bear
With black plastic eyes

You are frightened by the casual evils here:
The boy with the German shepherd face
And the serpent with two heads

The world spinning around you:
Pink cotton candy clinging to white paper sticks
The quickening music of the merry-go-round
Fractured colors splashing across the faces of strangers
Until dizziness wraps its hands around you

Somewhere above the din
You hear the moan and grunt of my breath
It anchors you to the sky with the clink of a chain
And you feel
For the first time in your life
That you are safe

This safety becomes pleasure
Filling your body with a golden steam
That seeks escape
Through clutching hands and curling toes
And finally in the hiss of a sigh
Leaving you as heavy as sleep
Or the future

You are sure that this weight is real
Your thoughts wander to the house of mirrors
You see your reflection, seduced by itself
Giving birth to infinity
You turn sideways, as if to disappear
And are overcome by the desire
To run and never stop















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On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:
Im speachless, this is awesome.


On Thursday January 29th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:
The deeper meaning behind each action meshed all together in swirling colors. My mind is still trying to absorb the swirling images. Fan-fucking-tastic. :::OLd


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
Pretty damn good writing here..I should read more..-Kefka


On Saturday August 9th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:
you are a true poet... i cant find the words my dear.... amazing peice, a true testimony to your talent.


On Tuesday August 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (42) writes:
I was right there with you this whole time. I felt what you described. Thats something. This seemed a border between deceit and true security. I love it. ^aura^


On Monday August 4th, 2003, Griffin (134) writes:
i need to learn to say more but, nice write


On Saturday August 2nd, 2003, blackdarkness (309) writes:
great write...this is amazing...I love it....your are very talented.....


On Saturday August 2nd, 2003, blackdarkness (309) writes:
you*


On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
metaphorically rich, like too much cotton candy... sticky sweet and in arms that speak of safety/security, but must still reach for the stars, unexplored... sexual, not too casual, demented like everyone, always running even if you're not moving


On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
one of my fav's from you


On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, Silent_Poet (72) writes:
Boy with the German Shepherd face? Ouch! There's some good content here, must read more of your works. -SP


On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
screams of fear and joy, all in one, impossible to tell the difference. It transfers surreal images in my mind....thanks for sharing...{dia}


On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
the whole write had a combination of tension and dizziness till it concludes as a release...i truly enjoyed this one...so full of thought and feeling.


On Monday July 28th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
Wow this is good.. ill go read some more of your works. Monkey


On Monday July 28th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
the excitment and the fear all rolled into a good time with cotton candy, very nice.................O.


On Monday July 28th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
awesome, truly awesome. i loved it i could almost see the lights and colors


On Monday July 28th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:
this is absolutely amazing... both images woven together so tightly, so well, they become one vision.


On Monday July 28th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
it is done here, this masterpiece, your surreal and artistic vision is translated perfectly; like electrodes to my willing brain.......i feel your words.........urban


On Monday July 28th, 2003, Ravenblade (273) writes:
hmmm, for some reason I couldn't get out of my mind some kind of dark image, yet happy times still filled with dread...great write, has interesting way of twisting my images...maybe I just kept thinking carn evil...I don't know



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