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My Body Lightly Rhyming on a Bad Day

My hand holds a word
And the word is unspoken
My heart hides a stone
And the stone is a token

My stomach grows tight
Like my throat that is choking
My eyes: wicks of candles
Blown out, amber and smoking

My back is a burden
Red, hot and swollen
My mouth speaks this poem
But the words are thus stolen

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On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

You rhyme just as well, but Its a struggle sometimes to find the right words. Still amazed =)

On Friday August 15th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

I'm no good a rhythm..(no not that kind!)..I mean in poet..Hails to you for knowing what your doing.-Kefka

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (42) writes:

I love this! Great job! The rhythm makes it flow like wine. ^aura^

On Monday July 21st, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

little twist, little bliss, little touch of reality rhythmically rhyming on a long long day

On Monday June 23rd, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (749) writes:

Nice piece! The first stanza is especially well-worded! Ciao, T/S

On Friday June 20th, 2003, GothicBlack (266) writes:

I dont know what the hell your talking about, this couldn't have been a "bad day" for your created sucha wonderful write.... ~gothic~

On Thursday June 19th, 2003, Raven (367) writes:

That was unbelievable... wow... I love it, even if you may think the rhyming is on a "bad day" . . . _Raven

On Thursday June 19th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:

i totaly agree nice job

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