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Perfect Slave

I want to cut your perfect skin
…Bleed…
To break your perfect mold
To make you hideous
like me
I want the blood to flow
like my love
for you
…Drip…

I want to cover myself with your beauty
…Hide…
I want to feed my lust
for you
with sex and pain
and anger
I want you to serve
…Slave…

I want to bind your limbs and heart
…Freedom…
I want you plead and to scream
for my mercy, my love
To beg me to stop
To beg me to not
To give all and ask for nothing,
but for me to take it
…Possession…

I want your thoughts to be mine
…Control…
I want my commands to be your heartbeats
your pulse
You will wake and sleep
and moan and scream to them
I want, I demand, I receive
…Obedience….

I want to leave the perfect wound
…Scar…
I want the memory of our love
To stain your body for all to see
I want the sting to always burn
In the mirror
In your mind
In your skin
…Forever…

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On Wednesday September 27th, 2006, Jadedwings (356) writes:

impressive.....you sent a shudder through my soul

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Sin (1622) writes:

I had been conquered and enraptured, destroyed and renewed, rent in fragments and made whole, freed and enslaved, broken and created..beautiful write ~kristy

On Sunday September 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:

i like it. wow. -CG

On Thursday April 15th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:

mmmmmmmmmmmmm

On Tuesday March 2nd, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

ooo that gives me the shakes...I like it

On Tuesday October 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

true love...emotions felt so deeply...truly sensuous.**

On Friday September 19th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

rereading this... and man... you know, i am aching to be that slave... not for sensuality, but emotional desire to serve... this was described perfectly from the other side. it's made me slightly wistful.

On Wednesday July 30th, 2003, Liz (401) writes:

I understand exactly the feelings behind this, and that scares me. Which means it's sending your message. Horribly good.

On Friday June 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

Love it

On Wednesday June 11th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

I definatly enjoyed this...wickedly honest..."To make you hideous like me" Oh what a line! Well done!

On Friday May 16th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (622) writes:

Wickid... gleefully wickid in fact. You stained the poem with such richness...~DW~

On Wednesday May 7th, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

yes .. this is very good , i enjoy the very darkness in this you breath

On Thursday May 1st, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

Very lovely... yes... must say, tho... a lovely Mistress once put it perfectly... "I would never harm you... hurt, yes, but harm, never. There's worlds of difference between hurt and harm." Good write.

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

It's like looking into the mind of a serial killer, or even just a demented thought in a regulars joes mind. I like fishes word arcane. love and hate.. life and death.

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:

Got chills! Very sensual indeed.. perfectly naughty in every way. Great work

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, MindRape (863) writes:

VERY sensual, passionate. Good write :)

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

arcane and black. well written, sensual...

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

wicked. i especially like the words that stand alone.i feel the same way sometimes-but sometimes i want to be that slave

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