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Dilusional

Dilusional to think of love
Instant knowledge upon meeting of eyes

Souls entertwined
As our limbs are
Minds Overinteligent
Or attempting to be

Existing on a higher plane
Searching for the part you took
When you turned your back on me

Hidding to stop the emotions
Let us all hope the dam holds
mixed with tears is blood

It felt like destiny when our bodies met
Not the hopeless lust you describe

--This is unfinished, i hit a block.. Please leave a comment and help me out with this..I'm lost with what to do to finish it, Thanks... Brandy

Brandy L. Taylor

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On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:

yeah...it stabs in parts; it's not in the least bit smooth....but their is a gentle shimmer to this; like a lake in dark light...rather than post something unfinished why not re-edit it at a later date to post

On Sunday October 9th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:

umm lets see...spellcheck and thats all i can think of.

On Sunday October 9th, 2005, veingo (590) writes:

Just be honest about the feeling you were left with after the encounter.(That's what I think.) *V*

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