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"Angel vs. Demon" by A Burning God

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When I look into your eyes
I see an immortal being.
When I see you smile,
I feel completeness.
When I hear you laugh,
I feel like I’ve found gold.
When I look at your body,
I see an angel looking back at me.
When I held your body,
I felt in my heart the truth.


When I look inward,
I see a mortal being
When I see my smile,
I feel incompleteness.
When I hear my laughter,
I feel like I’ve found coal.
When I look at my body,
I see a starved demon looking back
When I try to comfort myself,
I feel the lies in my heart.

I’m thinking if we were meant to be
Only because I don’t want another experience
Like the last one…….




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On Tuesday April 25th, 2006, The Fool (1003) writes:
This just broke my heart and made me mourn for such love, and peace that could be found in one person*sighs*


On Monday February 13th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
oh, this is beautifully touching..i've read it a few times now, and haven't commented til now. this is lovely in it's exploration of love from a different aspect. gorgeous.


On Saturday January 21st, 2006, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
one of the best writes i've ever seen anywhere on DP* -Kel


On Saturday January 21st, 2006, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
*hugs* this...is beautiful..the self examination of yourself, and the girl you love..its beyond words...and like leluna..you will find somebody that makes you happy..and you will be happy..and if ur not..i'll step in..i love you bro, and this was one of t


On Monday January 30th, 2006, A Burning God (61) writes:
I just hope she feels the same way


On Friday January 20th, 2006, leluna (14) writes:
well written, and strikes my heart. i personally went through this for years until i found the 'right' one. i'm extremely unlucky, so i'm sure you will find it sooner! keep the faith, and remember- you are the angel to someone else.


On Friday January 20th, 2006, Nail Bunny (229) writes:
Wonderful. Sad, reflectice, impressive, a good work, well placed and well spoken.



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