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Life cannot feel any worse.
The father is dying,
Saying that he has less than ten years,
The mother still treats the first-born like the husband
Both brother and sister have turned against the first-born.
The one person he trusted his life with
Has betrayed him, for a first love.
Friends leave his side,
Making him take on his hardships alone.
His two elders who he could tell and ask anything of
Have passed to the other side.
Suicide has crossed his mind,
But he cannot cut himself to pieces.
He finds release somehow, but he’s falling fast.
Soon, he will lose himself,
And quench the knife’s thirst.




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On Monday November 14th, 2005, Nail Bunny (229) writes:
I can't describe this, or my feelings after reading this. if you need me, anytime, im there for you dude.


On Sunday November 13th, 2005, coly (76) writes:
hey ive been there its not the way to go i didnt figure this out until i was in they ambliunce for overdosing on pills keep youre head up shit will get better if you wait it out coly


On Sunday November 13th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (475) writes:
dont do it..for me..please dont do it..it doesnt help anything..believe me....there are ppl who love you, and wont turn on you..and i'll never leave...i dont know what else to say..but please..dont do this to yourself.. -Kel



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