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Blood Lust

Blood is dripping
Dripping down
Down the arm
Of the girl's white gown
She doesn't notice
Nor does he
They're too much
In ecstacy
Blood is dripping
Gushing out
Out the head
Of the talent scout
The future star
Got way pissed off
He got the gun
And shot it off
Blood is gushing
Squirting from
The retarded kid
Who's face is numb
He got too much
On his teacher's nerves
He had no patience
Left in reserve
Blood is running
From my hand
I'm writing faster
This book now damned.

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On Thursday March 17th, 2005, steuss (145) writes:

Amazing flow thoughout this piece. I'm awed by its natural flow and rhyme. Well done!

On Wednesday December 24th, 2003, Cwn Annwn (107) writes:

Wow that was cool....that was wonderful..if I could I would favorite it..~GoNe~

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:

this is definately a favorite. you kick ass.

On Wednesday June 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (28) writes:

I feel quite left out without a favorites list but then again i love being different! 4 5 years about I wanted to be a vampire...this brings back my cravings...

On Tuesday July 29th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:

me too, me too! ...damn. i'd be happy if i just had the teeth.... but that would proably lead to... well... nevermind :) great write

On Sunday June 1st, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:

Great poem! I loved reading it and I will add this to my favorites as well.

On Wednesday May 21st, 2003, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:

i will also add it to my favorites once i up grade

On Sunday April 13th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (343) writes:

I love this poem! I'm going to add it to my favorites. Outstanding job!

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