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I live for you like I breathe to live


Copyright 2004 totaltrip

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On Tuesday August 21st, 2007, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
as a one liner I'd say it's very flattering the the man/woman to whom you wrote it...though it is a simple poem I'd say it contains more than one would originally think...given some thought...I'd say it's very romantic


On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (445) writes:
awww thats just cute :)


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Twilight (2102) writes:
i eff-ing love you guys...


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Lynaes (1129) writes:
We love you too. :D *smooch!*


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, anth (1612) writes:
i love blackpool tower


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Ssh anthy! you'll kill the moment


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Solace (1424) writes:
blackpool tower? sounds lame...how bout the tiny tower? or is this not a place for generic ego comments? ;)


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Twilight (2102) writes:
no...stop that. if you do this again-ill stab you with a building.


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Lynaes (1129) writes:
lol.. Stab-age with a building? only Kristness could come up with such classicness..


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, anth (1612) writes:
i recommned the eiffel tower


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Lynaes (1129) writes:
ouch..


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Twilight (2102) writes:
ditto. but i dont think any other building would do the trick.


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, anth (1612) writes:
how could you forget blackpool tower:o


On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Lynaes (1129) writes:
This is true.. the effiel tower is quite efficient in shape, without going into too much detail..



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