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That girl.

I am the one with the big brown eyes
The big sad brown eyes
Always with that smile
The smile that makes it easy
The smile that hides those big brown eyes
Those big sad brown eyes.

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On Wednesday December 26th, 2007, Nill (169) writes:

One summer evening drunk as hell I left there nearly lifeless. An old man in the corner sang where the water lillies grow, blah blah blah, and I thought about a pair of brown eyes. That waited once for me. Where his brown eyes were waiting. -Close approximation of the Pogues.

On Sunday August 19th, 2007, Err0r (579) writes:

Interesting. The repetition of words makes a great way of showing importance. I like the simplicity of this write. Very nice. =)

On Sunday August 19th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:

hmmmmmmmmm.....what colour are your eyes again?!?! Hehe...just kidding

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Ainsof (1814) writes:

I know that girl, haven't seen her for awhile... my brown-eyed girl... when unsmiling eyes crown her flawless teeth

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:

simple but with good rhythem, like a song...good stuff

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (256) writes:

"the smile that makes it easy"... i know that smile all to well. *sigh* i see my own in those big brown eyes of yours.

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