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far from eloquence

she doesn’t look for words to say much anymore;
she has only blank dreams, and dreams
are where she used to speak,
far
from
the polluted white sheets and diluted white walls
and muted white skin that has faded
right alongside her

eloquence.

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On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, Ainsof (1729) writes:

This she is described so parched, so drab and worn... so mundanely muted and seemingly without spirit, without inspiration, without the animation of the word that infuses life with breath... this she is so described as distanced from eloquence... and yet

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, Ainsof (1729) writes:

eloquence exudes from her description. may she recall her dreams when she wakes...

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, me_the_messenger (174) writes:

speechless. so short and yet its so.... i dont even know. nice write. *messenger

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:

grr.

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (409) writes:

wonderful.

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, purr_verse (1483) writes:

i know this too. Excellent.

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:

colorful

On Wednesday June 6th, 2007, Estrella Destrozada (234) writes:

short and to the damn point. absolutely beautiful.

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