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the night is too beautiful to be black.

but when she felt nothing
slip
through her
hands, she asked
me not to
leave; not to leave
her
t her.e
in the calm.


the irreversible quiet.


there is something in a scream
that deafens a mind, and her scream was
not the exception, but perfection
and it was
only the beginning of
the beginning of
the end.



the night was too beautiful to be



black.









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On Friday October 5th, 2007, Tonights Decision (173) writes:
for me it was like, slowly ever so slowly taking back the nights..a the brink the pause before the last word is so .. endlessly felt..


On Monday April 16th, 2007, silent circus (400) writes:
you [are]~*~*/////{fucking}+-+-+- amazing----loved it ~*dani*~


On Saturday April 14th, 2007, i tremble (47) writes:
wow.


On Friday April 13th, 2007, dying angel (1374) writes:
"her scream was not the exception, but perfection" i always enjoy reading you. there are always lines from your poetry that i can never shake from my bones. and i wouldn't have it any other way.


On Friday April 13th, 2007, Tania (318) writes:
'the night is too beautiful to be black' wonderfully worded.. fabulous.


On Friday April 13th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:
This was so powerful and amazing. I truly felt your words as if you whispered them into my ear. -Marlena


On Friday April 13th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
it's nice to see your name in the posts list again...I've missed that, even if the tone is black=bleak; succinct, a short burst of mind menace. Welcome back, strong strong post


On Friday April 13th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:
JEESH! I agree with theskiesdenied...every word in this, sent a fresh batch of chills coursing down my spine. I can't put my thoughts into words...at least, not phrases good enough for your eyes. ~*Beth*~


On Friday April 13th, 2007, blue (1778) writes:
ok. To say that this is wonderfully worded, or you have a gifted mind toward verse would.. ahh.. I am tingling. Literally. I leave it at that, poet. ~b



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