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some.more

i want
to run my fingers
.. ..[no, much more]
.
/ . .
.
i want to
run
my hands
. [/more]. ...
... .
.
.....
i want to run
laughing and wild, spinning
crazed; closed.eyed smiling
knowing no.thing but the terrible raw feel
and the un.earthen smell of his long[ing]
h.air.. .
and wrap his freedom
tangle
around me like some halo

some heaven
..... ..

some henna
. . ...

some heretic
..
.
. . .
.
.

.

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On Thursday March 13th, 2008, slow.burn.star (97) writes:

__ dreams are in fragment.

On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, Solace (1424) writes:

abandonment, in the most pleasant sense of the word - like running through fields and rolling down hills of clover with fresh smiles and darling embraces. If I could die with those smiles impressed upon my mind...

On Wednesday January 31st, 2007, Mylissa (1090) writes:

this is outstanding.

On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:

love the structure and choice of words, will have to read more

On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:

a crunching impact of intense velocity of feelings; the cyclone of your mind just ripped loose rawhead machinations within my feeble conscious. Amen to that - do it again!!

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, Astra Dei (645) writes:

OH sweet god, that was nicely done my friend.

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, blue (1754) writes:

oh yes! oh yes indeed! =) ~b

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, Philla (141) writes:

you have far more than just talent.

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, dying angel (1344) writes:

intense...with a hint of desperation and such passion.

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, AniDayz (1284) writes:

goddess of earthlovesexrhymeart...i dont know...thats the energy that poured out from my fingertips flowing from the sensuality, the essence...the artistry of this...creation...muchly enjoyed this is...you are...

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, Twilight (2102) writes:

if I could pinpoint my personal poetry of choice...this would be it. subtle and intense. in few words you say more then some can in volumes. amazing work here.

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, DowngradeBeauty (58) writes:

It would be more appealing if cleaned up and organized a bit more, but over all a great peice.

On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, verablue (162) writes:

fucking awesome!!! thats all there is to say...

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