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she found him
in a field of night,
going deep into the abysmal.

not a motion,
not even lungs filled….
the dark so hungry,
devouring him
in his stilled pretense.

she smiled; said his name

he wanted trespass;
intrusion
and so sought
isolation for togetherness,
alone;
but yet the stone
would not
bleed.

so she mended him,
wounds
calloused.
ran fingers down
his back, over bone razed
with rantings, crazed
of wantings
and curled her hands
through his mind.. ... .

with a whisper
[only the slightest]
the wall cracked against
splayed obsidian,
crumbled,
for her to lay the pieces
inside her
self.. ..




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On Wednesday May 21st, 2008, After hours (577) writes:
I want "she" to find me...that was out of control, you break my thoughts into bits and pieces.


On Tuesday September 5th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
you don't get the plaudits you deserve, truly you don't.What was it you said about the margins though, the outskirts are so beautiful...indeed,don't you just highlight that...felt like I was inside every living entity here, that capacity to go into someth


On Tuesday September 5th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
something's skin and be it...you're a shapeshifter!!


On Tuesday September 5th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
going deep into the abysmal...that's what I've been doing. I hope someone will find me and pull me out. Anyone?!?!?


On Tuesday September 5th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
also some beautiful vowel sound effects in this calloused/crazed/razed/wantings/hands/curled - love the manner this effects the minds tongue


On Sunday April 2nd, 2006, Sin (1637) writes:
your writes always have this stillness to them...as if a mere sound would disturb the illusion...this was beautiful ~kristy


On Tuesday October 18th, 2005, purr_verse (1437) writes:
Magnificently expressed. I particularly love the opening stanza, but the entire piece is just... Ah, hell. I can't verbalise it properly. Star time. *faves*


On Monday October 17th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:
Wow, what an image to imprint into my gasping brain...such intense beauty...every word struck me harder than the last. Beautiful write. *Evangel*



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