Purr_verse said it all....incredibly immersive, words selected finitely to leave the reader wanting more. Awesome.

Magnificently balanced write - just enough. Not overdone, not underdone - perfect. Beautiful, sensual, subtle and absolutely immersive. Wonderful work.

Appropriate title as you always bring the 'feel' of a new day rising, please tell me the "parchment" is a vagina...lie to me if required, i'm sweat'n on it saint:)

i read this first without reading the title, and after i read it... and I didn't breathe... then i saw the title and I exhaled, and it was beautiful

physical as well as incorporeal; I always feel confined to your attention in your short poems, they burst with conscious, consceince reawakenings and emergence; desperate and yearning; sad and wistful - but not always, we had a great abstract spiritual element to the classic 'with a stick' so your rnage is always very impressive; deep and articulate and emotionally receptive...your are a brillaint thinker and ultimately, poet/artist....always, respect :)

*range* is impressive - unlike my spelling!

Sincere write...great piece

=) -Carl

"Whoa" Is all I can say...

amazing....