DarkPoetry -|- saintedmad -|- sunbathing

sunbathing

you.

crush .
.
me. crashing
against castles, against
the back
bones of the wrecked
hips of the ocean
so hard, that i taste
your mother of pearl membranes
pul.sing.
sing.ing
as the sea
swells…i smell you
like psalms of salt
on skin as every
s.hell
beneath
grinds to sand.

we made this
.
tide.
turn
back.

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On Monday May 26th, 2008, SpiritofShiobhan (43) writes:

This is the most mesmerizingly beauftiful piece...I have lost count on how many re-reads...excellent talent.

On Tuesday April 22nd, 2008, AniDayz (1297) writes:

beyond breath.

On Monday April 21st, 2008, blue (1778) writes:

squish

On Monday April 21st, 2008, After hours (462) writes:

And the winner is, ...f***ing brilliant. Thankyou jules for putting me on to this unseen treasure, lingering piece.

On Monday April 21st, 2008, What Limes (162) writes:

a good way to end 4-20

On Saturday April 19th, 2008, carlosjackal (1608) writes:

Simply amazing.ness :)

On Saturday April 19th, 2008, the-rapist (365) writes:

you made mother nature more than proud.

On Friday April 18th, 2008, NikesRain (1508) writes:

still trying to find the words for this... amazing is the best i can manage at the moment

On Friday April 18th, 2008, Guillotine (232) writes:

"Like psalms of salt". I loved this one, ness, the wonderful alliteration and personification brought it to life and left my breathing shallow, listening for the ocean.

On Friday April 18th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (371) writes:

*agrees with Snuggles* Well written Sainted, I like the way it felt transitioning one line to the next *salutes*

On Friday April 18th, 2008, Fallen Moon (548) writes:

omg thats fucking awesome

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