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too fool to talk

but i cried
no
words…..
though i cried while words were said. ..
and i cried while words awoke the dead
memory
of where he used to
make me fall instead
of winter. ..

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On Monday July 28th, 2008, After hours (567) writes:

Perfect piece of writing, from the first line it cried 'critical'...the intensity of undertone was instruction enough to slow down,.. pause a moment, which in turn,..allowed you to imagine explore your past unto the lead up to those "tears"...and dont get me started on that last line,..one of the best ..turned lines i've ever heard, particuarly in the context of the over all write....exceptional

On Friday July 11th, 2008, urbanhumility (1362) writes:

few words.......so very strong.....

On Saturday March 8th, 2008, Kui (729) writes:

Simply stunning.

On Saturday March 8th, 2008, tangeled (506) writes:

simply genius. ~ta

On Saturday March 8th, 2008, the-rapist (372) writes:

how a deficit of words becomes an abundance of meaning- perfect poetry

On Saturday March 8th, 2008, Narcissa (677) writes:

I felt this...stunning.

On Thursday March 6th, 2008, Ainsof (1831) writes:

you may choose silence... but the world would be at a loss. and the only fools would be those who never noticed. Gorgeousness... I can see inside you... only gorgeousness.

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