DarkPoetry -|- saintedmad -|- if i were yours. .... ..

if i were yours. .... ..

my shadow
would never
be
alone
.

along
the sinew
of strewn
softmortarshell
skins
and suns

. ..

if i were
yours
. ..

.
your words
..
would slip
the sleeves off my
shoulders
and speak

surrender
.. .

. . ....
.
.
so colourful

.

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On Thursday March 13th, 2008, slow.burn.star (95) writes:

_favorite.

On Friday December 28th, 2007, DoctorAsh (512) writes:

Zit popping beauty - Let us vomit to the sounds of love. Excellent.

On Friday December 28th, 2007, italianbella (305) writes:

beautiful and delicate great write

On Tuesday December 4th, 2007, Ainsof (1729) writes:

mmmmm a colorful surrender... and a soft mortar shell skin, strewn... why do I sense a war brewing withing this fabulously light and beyond tenderly shaped work? Ah... If only I could find my demise in your arms... perhaps the final solution is complete invasion and occupation... woo me into annihilation... but if only my words could conquer... if only my mouth knew the way to your skin... and beneath... ♥

On Saturday December 1st, 2007, Lynaes (1148) writes:

"your words would slip the sleeves off my shoulders and speak/surrender." How vulnerable, and perfect, and delicate. Loved it.

On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Six-Out (1832) writes:

beautiful.

On Thursday November 29th, 2007, What Limes (161) writes:

wow. I don't know what else to say.

On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, dying angel (1374) writes:

.......

On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, unspeakable truth (154) writes:

Perfection, from start to finish...

On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, Narcissa (718) writes:

"...My shadow would never be alone" love that line. somehow I wish there was more to this.

On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, veingo (552) writes:

Ahhhh. This is beauty. And I needed to hear something like this today. Thank you. ^V^

On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:

the end.... just the word color... it holds so much meaning, so many sidestreets the mind can take with metaphorical concepts that enlighten my life... everyone and everything is its own shining color... bravo

On Wednesday November 28th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:

If I were a platypi.. =) rawr.

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