DarkPoetry -|- saintedmad -|- carnivalium

it's in the eyes.

they are looking backwards now
foaming about like
Bosch ghosts
and
they all wear silent
little masks
everywhere they go.

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On Friday September 21st, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

Fucking magic.

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1164) writes:

sigh. i love your work. i wish i could tell you in a more eloquent way that you amaze me.

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Alanarchy (1615) writes:

Hindsight it 20/20. Col nailed it. Haunting.

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Alanarchy (1615) writes:

*is.... see what I mean. I get it right NOW.

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

to be honest this is crazy...so few words/lines should haunt me so but the opening salvo is like having a mirror of your eyes just come at you from nowhere

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

should NOT*...I meant

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

and then the strange surreal-esque tone of the next lines just adds to the sinister impression this poem creates....so sparse and so unique yet so damning and effective...you are simply incredible...it's as easy to say as that missy

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