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Primal

Me woman
You wolf

Wood language we speak

Food language

Bone deep stone language- my mother tongue

Breathe
Breathe me

You beast
Me meat

Tongues speak lung language

Salt is just to say

I
You

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On Tuesday April 22nd, 2008, After hours (574) writes:

Too clever for 2008, the fossils feel pride, thought it was great..look fwd to more.

On Tuesday April 1st, 2008, elisa (2018) writes:

cut the fat ...and eat the meat from the bone. primordial indeed. i love it

On Wednesday March 26th, 2008, Alanarchy (1600) writes:

Just a stream of words. But like good poetry, That's all it takes. And I was right there with you. Surprised, and a little ashamed, that I haven't read you before. That I know of, anyway.

On Wednesday March 26th, 2008, Geisha (752) writes:

This was cool..

On Wednesday September 5th, 2007, carlosjackal (1656) writes:

This was madness. Like it =) -Carl

On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, Aunty Depressant (706) writes:

years back...or beers too many? Hehehe

On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, SamoneDrone (408) writes:

Ha Ha Ha!!! I get that too, but, seriously speaking, I like how genuine this piece is. You cut out the superfaluous and make a very raw and comprehensable poem. ....-samone

On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, Gold Dust Woman (170) writes:

this was different..... a good different i might add and this reminded me of what maybe a cave man would speak. or earlier man in history. this was incredible to read!

On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, The Fool (1002) writes:

Incredible talking about the stone age I think time just shifted on me and I've lost in the wilderness of cavemen, watching as they evolve in the life.. The more scary version of humanitys past I assume. Incredible all the same ~Gothic

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