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Your mouth is a cave

Salt crystals and cigarette ash
Echoes
aches songs hums
I crawl into
under you
under your
underarms

Ashes to ashes
dust to – hush

I must (the hair- how it falls)
must leave

We turn into shiver and sweat
Fever then dust

To dust

(the hair – how it falls when I tear)

Dear dearest
read me to sleep
read me of us

You fall
You crush when I bend

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On Tuesday October 31st, 2006, An Expired Member (42) writes:

very nice job

On Thursday October 26th, 2006, An Expired Member (129) writes:

and wow beautiful poems you need to write more so I can read them

On Thursday October 26th, 2006, An Expired Member (129) writes:

wow beautiful words

On Monday October 16th, 2006, GreyDividing (194) writes:

Original in every way, stray thoughts lost in the structure like kids in a haunted house. I like this a lot.

On Monday October 9th, 2006, An Expired Member (129) writes:

this was so beautiful

On Monday October 9th, 2006, heartdripsblack (770) writes:

loved how this flowed. nice job.

On Friday October 6th, 2006, Tonights Decision (166) writes:

left me in.. suspense, wow..

On Thursday September 14th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:

a post from you is always a joy to read..this was scattered yet almost hushed..beautifully done.

On Thursday September 14th, 2006, Tibi (1) writes:

thank you sweet have kept reading you x

On Thursday September 14th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

this was well paced and probing, I really like things that feel different and surprising and this encapsulates that, very nice - top marks!! Col.

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