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I Crave The Ache

Come out & play
I'm not afraid
Don't make me wait
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Make me want
for nothing more
make me adore
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My sense of insecurity
Beat
into me
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Come play a game
of placeing blame
make me ashamed
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PLEASE!!!

Make me a toy
a whipping boy
you can enjoy
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Come again
and grind your sin
into my skin
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Go on and carve
a wicked scar
across my heart
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Then leave me bound
and beaten down
just like you found
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ME!!!!
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.PLEASE
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.ME
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.PLEASE.... ME....
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PLEASE ME!!!!

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On Thursday November 1st, 2007, Aunty Depressant (686) writes:

Naughty boy* swings on the goatee, slips and grabs other dangly bits.

On Thursday May 3rd, 2007, An Expired Member (22) writes:

Oh MIAOW!!

On Thursday December 14th, 2006, BeautifullyRuined (145) writes:

I love this.You made me smile.Thankyou I needed that.

On Friday December 1st, 2006, Mylissa (1075) writes:

Ughhhh you are right, this is mine!!! I love it!

On Thursday November 30th, 2006, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

please me, PLEASE ME PLEASE ME !!! Woot I Love It ][ ][

On Saturday July 29th, 2006, Sin (1639) writes:

psychological or sexual this gave me shivers, theres so much yearning in your words, a raw ache that begs to be rubbed...great write ~kristy

On Friday March 30th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:

psstt i still think this is wonderful :)

On Thursday March 16th, 2006, Vicious Pixie (52) writes:

yow....loved it. intense and a little naughty

On Friday March 10th, 2006, warmaprylrain (195) writes:

WOW! awesome flow here V, wasn't expecting it to ummm, 'come' out as it did for the ending..hehe*evil grin* I love it ~A~

On Wednesday March 8th, 2006, Err0r (570) writes:

Thank god. You're my addiction. And I've just had my fix! :P This was amazing. I kinda made up my own beat in my head along with this. Very interesting structure- I like.

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, blake (42) writes:

to me it sounded like you were crying out for attention, like for once if only it was about you. hmmm interesting perspectives hehe.

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, veingo (584) writes:

You gutter minded FREAKS! That's not what I meant at all.

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, veingo (584) writes:

Then again, now that you mention it. Giggity Giggity Giggity! lol

On Monday March 20th, 2006, NikesRain (1422) writes:

gutter minded freak? ... oh Vein how you wound... *dramatic sigh* ;)

On Tuesday March 21st, 2006, veingo (584) writes:

Aw come on, surely you know I meant that in the most loveing & respectful way. *wink*

On Tuesday March 7th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Wow! V you certainly know how to make a few knees go weak, among other parts. ;) This is freakin awesome. *Claps* Julia~

On Monday March 6th, 2006, NikesRain (1422) writes:

i'd rather think it more to adore without the beating down..but this...first thought was... Ohhh my ;)

On Monday March 6th, 2006, blue (1739) writes:

I feel dirty now. =P Sometimes you just have to give in man. lol. cool. ~b

On Monday March 6th, 2006, Ainsof (1830) writes:

I think I said something like that last line to some girl I met at the bar last weekend...I don't think I said it right. This is madly masochistic & powerful

On Monday March 6th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:

Wow that was nice Ron..You got a dirty side don't you ;)...I loved it was demanding and begging at the same time nice job mate

On Monday March 6th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:

ooo...dominatrix craving, are we? dirty, raunchy, and different...loved it

On Monday March 6th, 2006, elisa (2018) writes:

that quenchable thirst.....'....please me....'... i love th ending... very demanding in a please me Now sorta way;)

On Monday March 6th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:

this was intense..the rhyme scheme, interesting...this seemed to be different from your other writes, more erotic and in-your-face "please me"..lol..but i enjoyed it all the same.

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