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Void

I must escape, from this place
far from nowhere.

Someone, make me feel again.

Or fill me in.

For I am the void that
surrounds myself.

What longing!

Such yearning!

A want without boundary,
that cascades, never ending.

Give me something other than vacuum.

Even pain would be better than this
anti-existance, that still somehow,
can't devour my essence.

Something, give me someone.

Someone, give me something.

Anything, give me anything!

What could be worse than stark absence,
where there is not even an echo
to keep me company?

Tell me!

Is anyone there?

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On Thursday September 27th, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:

man can't explain the conection. so good. been there felt that .....still do

On Wednesday September 13th, 2006, An Expired Member (9) writes:

A perfectly descriptive depiction of loneliness..masterful in every meaning of the word.-HK

On Thursday February 16th, 2006, damascus (136) writes:

Man I'm sorry I'm kinnda late but I haven't kept up with reading my favs work anymore... Great write and I agree with every one else..... I think theres times we all felt like this...... I know I have

On Sunday February 5th, 2006, urbanhumility (1352) writes:

may peace answer your call .....your prose is profound in all aspects of your solemn quandry..............well done..............urban

On Wednesday January 25th, 2006, Army Barbie (500) writes:

Awww. I hate that I'm never on to read you anymore. You're lovely, just know. I'm here, rarely...but I'm here. =) -Courtney

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1057) writes:

I feel every ounce of this and then some! Simply heartwrenching & just f*ckin brilliant! Wow.... Julia~

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, Grey Lies (230) writes:

sadly...no not in this world of misconceptions...but, one can still dream.

On Friday January 20th, 2006, warmaprylrain (182) writes:

the freedom of such pain somehow leaves us out in the open and almost stranded in the void of ourselves.. I am still here as well. well written as always ~A~

On Friday January 20th, 2006, Err0r (579) writes:

Such a Powerful Ending.

On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:

Awww I loved it so painful and full of emontion*hugs*

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, dying angel (1344) writes:

God V...are you amazing or what. this is so painful, but so beautiful. great write.

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Ainsof (1814) writes:

here, have a beer. Sorry, couldn't resist :) The remarkable isolation you express so vividly and powerfully seems to arise from the depths of your being..."not even an echoe"..excellent write! (still, I recommend beer)

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, veingo (589) writes:

I'm already on it buddy.

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1162) writes:

*frowns*

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, veingo (589) writes:

Hey, I BURNED my tounge!

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1162) writes:

haven't you ever heard of fruit juice? or water?! and the tongue burning is your own fault. hmph.

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, veingo (589) writes:

You make a good point. *ponders*

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1073) writes:

I'm here, too, V...and I agree with glass, I miss your words as well. This is wonderfully portrayed, even if it seems to bug the hell out of you. I've felt like this before...I hope things get better soon. *Evangel*

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1162) writes:

i'm here, love. this is beautiful. i miss your words when you don't post for a while.."Even pain would be better than this anti-existance, that still somehow, can't devour my essence." you amaze me. *hugs*

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