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Every so often, I stare past the whole.

I single out the particles.


And the colors.



I see pieces of my mother, and Bits of my father.

Some fit perfectly.


Others seem forced.





And the colors.






Patches of new, and smooth. Swatches of tattered, and worn.

I'm to young to be old.


To old to be young.




Those vibrant colors.



Scratches and scrapes, bruises and scars.

Left there by myself, by ex-loves.


By life.




So many colors.




Stiches, and staples, patches and repairs.

Made by my family, my friends, myself,


and my children.




My god the colors!





It's hard to describe all the colors I see,


when I look at myself,




In this stained glass mirror.






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On Saturday January 14th, 2006, NikesRain (1421) writes:
...we are but the cumulation of our experiences... this is such a vibrant and bold example of that expression... the metaphors are wonderful...


On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Army Barbie (492) writes:
I missed reading you. Always taking my breath away in the most simplistic manners. Beautiful as always


On Tuesday January 3rd, 2006, Shewolf (39) writes:
Brilliant write, I really like it! Shewolf


On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, CrestfallenTears (22) writes:
that is a beautiful poem. I love you wording in this work! It is awesome.


On Thursday December 15th, 2005, Err0r (571) writes:
Awe. That was pretty. And very clever my friend. Lovely write. :)


On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, mysticventures (545) writes:
incredible format and thought - excellent work :)


On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, Michelle Xiao (499) writes:
A beautiful piece of self scrutiny, and understanding, the colour explosion in your mind is overwhelming.


On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, Esau (279) writes:
wow. excellent wording. "stained glass mirror." i never would have thought of that. excellent.


On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, LostInDespair (197) writes:
Wonderful write all the way through and the impact at the ending... I never saw it coming. Well done. ~Lost~


On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1137) writes:
i believe that this is my favorite of yours, it's such a timeless portrait of life and what goes along with it, described perfectly through the usage of colors. "Stiches, and staples, patches and repairs./Made by my family, my friends, myself"- perfect.


On Monday December 12th, 2005, down-sx-ft (50) writes:
This is gonna have to go in my bookmarks!!! ~down


On Monday December 12th, 2005, blue (1742) writes:
God damn man!! That was fucking brilliant!!! Not a word in vain.. complete to be exact. Absolutely wonderful!! take a bow man, take a bow. ~b



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