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I AM ( the birth of Veingo)

He,

has always been inside of me.

Dreaming,

and forcing me to see.

Speaking,

and blaming it on me.

Fighting,

and screaming to be free.

AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !

I stare,

in the mirror all the time.

I see,

all the things I try to hide.

I glare,

hard an deep into his eyes.

I want,

to let go. I want to die.

AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !

I

was never confident in life.

He

is strong as steel, and cold as ice.

Hope

that what I'm doing now is right.

Time

to give in. Give up the fight.

AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !
AND NOW I AM !

He is me.

I am him.

we are we.

AND NOW I AM!!!!

( I wrote this a long time ago.
it may suck, but hey,
it's mine.)

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On Friday May 19th, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (31) writes:

I like this... its a simple yet powerful portrayal of an inner strugle... reminds me of something I wrote a long time ago...

On Friday March 24th, 2006, Astra Dei (644) writes:

Sounds a lot less painful than actual child birth. -_* Anyways, i like this one. Its hopeless, yet it has this edge of defiance. well done

On Monday January 16th, 2006, An Expired Member (5) writes:

speechless except to say what an excellent birth...oh and I see your not afraid of wide open spaces, nice touch

On Monday January 16th, 2006, Ainsof (1838) writes:

sounds like someone else I've heard of.....name begins with a d......Dhamer, I think...Jeff....cannabalism will have that effect. No, seriously, psychologically intriguing and universally relevant, doesn't suck at all

On Wednesday December 28th, 2005, Army Barbie (499) writes:

This was fuckin awesome! If it sucked...well I wouldn't bother to comment I'm sure. You rawk ron

On Wednesday December 28th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:

I just love a southern draaawl:)-

On Tuesday December 27th, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (109) writes:

I think this is pretty cool myself!!! I like it alot

On Thursday December 22nd, 2005, James_the_Saint (131) writes:

I enjoyed this. It made me quite happy, in a way in which I shouldn't be happy?

On Tuesday December 13th, 2005, LordBrosnian (65) writes:

I see...

On Monday December 12th, 2005, Err0r (574) writes:

I don't think it sucks. :) Although I would like to say one thing. I'm a hypocrite but hey.-

On Monday December 12th, 2005, Err0r (574) writes:

It's like if your favorite food was steak- it's all about presentation you don't want it served to you on a trash can lid, but on a plate with barsley. :) So don't say it sucks. Let us decide. BEAUTIFUL.:) Your writes are amazing.

On Sunday December 11th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:

"( I wrote this a long time ago. it may suck, but hey, it's mine.)" i like this part best. you win! [and no, it very much does not suck.]

On Sunday December 11th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:

I missed something. What do you mean "you win"?

On Sunday December 11th, 2005, doll on the rag (223) writes:

um... that's just me saying yay you and everything... ^^ you win at life or whatever. go you!

On Sunday December 11th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:

Oh, thanks.

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

I know the feelings well. It's a tough battle sometimes looking yourself in the face in the mirror. Your reflection knows whether or not you're living up to your expectations and judges the worst when you aren't. Cool write. ~Ship!

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:

Thanks all.

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, LostInDespair (199) writes:

Well done. This kicks ass V, never doubt yourself. ~Lost~

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, BloodySparrow (67) writes:

excelent, replace "sucks" with execellent... fit's it better

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

o.O)) I thought that was really great man! Suck?? nonono.. you must be mistaken.. nope, I'm sure of it! You are mistaken. ~b

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:

it actually gave me chills..almost frightening portrayal of the inner, trying to achieve outer status, to break away from it's confines. the struggle, the acceptance, it's all portrayed here. lovely.

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, Ezimo (266) writes:

This dosn't suck i like it very much its good.

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