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No reason. Part 2

I tried to make you love me.

To be the perfect man.

I tried so hard to be all that you need.

I tried to make you love me.

To make you understand.

That you were all the world and more, to me.
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(A magical feeling.)
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I wanted nothing more,

than to be with you.

than to serve you.

to provide for you.

to worship you.
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( A magical failing)
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You called me,

simple.

without ambition.

content.

a coward.

I guess I'm not enough.

I guess I've failed again.

I guess I'll never be the one for you.

But don't stop reading yet.

Come back again, my pretty.

I think I have one more poem for you.

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On Thursday June 28th, 2007, An Expired Member (50) writes:

This is excellent. I'm digging it. Not just the cliffhanger, this whole thing was good. Can't wait for the next.

On Saturday November 19th, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (109) writes:

you are beyond words!!I'd loved to have met you early in my troubled life!

On Tuesday November 15th, 2005, warmaprylrain (182) writes:

I'd come back, but then again, write or read your words, your heart and soul out like this to me, and I would never leave WOW.. you take my breath away ^V^, ...~A~

On Friday November 11th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1162) writes:

i love the contrast between part one and part two..but i must say, i think i liked this one the best..it's filled with a bitter that chills my bones. the ending was perf. i can't wait for part three. =)

On Thursday November 10th, 2005, Army Barbie (500) writes:

Man, I like this better than Part 1 I think. "Come back again, my pretty. I think I have one more poem for you." Man oh man, that's hot. I love it, dah'lin.

On Thursday November 10th, 2005, veingo (590) writes:

Hehe, stick around if you really want to here un-nice things. There will be a part 3.

On Friday November 11th, 2005, Army Barbie (500) writes:

Utoh. That almost scares me. I like to hear nice things! But to hear something unkind from you...is worth waiting for.

On Saturday October 29th, 2005, saintedmad (1156) writes:

such convincing desperation; [i'd come back :)] i love the inner trappings of rhyme and reasoning in this. .. ~ness

On Saturday October 29th, 2005, veingo (590) writes:

Without rhyme, or reason, what would a poet have? ^V^

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