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New York, New York.
San Francisco bay.
I've had to run, from the Phoenix sun,
and escape from LA.

And I had my fill,
just passing through.
You know it isn't very pretty,
what a city with no pity can do.

Come back my friend, my love, my healer.
Now I smoke & drink & sleep all alone.
When you left, you said "I,ll see you later".
But I can't wait, I've got to bring you home.

Hell just ain't no fun, without you!

I've torn Paris down.
Turned Glasgow all around.
Through east & west Berlin.
Checked out the Bangkok Inn.
Watched London Bridge fall down.

And I had my fill,
just passing through.
And no, it isn't very pretty,
what a city with no pity can do.

Bring back my heart, my soal, my reason.
Now I'm hurt and hollow, desperate and cold.
When you left I knew we'd meet again but,
I never thought that it would take this long.

And Hell just ain't no fun, without you!

I keep moveing along.
I'm searching your old haunts.
At night I just can't sleep.
I lay there trying to think.
Where might you have gone?

And I'm so damned tired,
of being cut up and bruised.
You know it isn't very pretty,
what a city with no pity can do.

Come back my friend, my love, my healer.
I've been chaseing you for far to long.
Every time I think I might have found you.
I've come to find out that, you've been long gone.

But hell just ain't no fun, without you!










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On Wednesday January 2nd, 2008, Zen (634) writes:
I liked this, it sounded like something I would read in a book.


On Sunday January 14th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:
this reminded me of "Home" by Michael Buble...and it sang in my head beautifully ~kristy


On Sunday September 24th, 2006, An Expired Member (14) writes:
the use of repetition here is very good, you used it just enough, in all the right places, not always easy to do... *~`burned`~*


On Wednesday February 8th, 2006, weyvern (103) writes:
wow this is perfect! I can feel the agony and i think everyone needs that healer at some point wonderfully written!


On Monday February 6th, 2006, Nail Bunny (229) writes:
this is a fabulos piece. terrific concept and .... uh... stuff!


On Thursday January 26th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1058) writes:
You are freakin amazing!! This kicks ass!


On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, Ainsof (1813) writes:
yeah, need someone to raise a little hell with....nice rhyme, stanzas and refrain (sounds like marriage again...can ya tell I'm recently divorced?)


On Sunday November 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:
i love this oen it makes me think about someone that i loved very much and now it feels like my hell isnt so much fun anymore its empty and ull with out him good job this rocks


On Sunday October 16th, 2005, Frater Synth (34) writes:
well i didn't really like this peice that much but whos 2 say my opinion really matters here


On Monday October 17th, 2005, veingo (586) writes:
Honesty, ROCKS! So thanks anyway. ^V^


On Friday October 14th, 2005, elisa (2028) writes:
this felt so natural, for a moment i forgot i was sitting alone reading the words in my mind and i lost myself in a spoken moment of a conversation between two people truly in love...........as i come back to reality.



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