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"When she was , my love" by veingo

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She was holy once, in my sight.
                   in my heart.
                   in my soal.
                   in my life.

When she cut me, I defended her actions.
         cursed, words.
         crushed, means.
         left, reasons.

When she came back the third, time she was normal.
                       fourth, equal.
                       fifth, fallible.
                       sixth, regretful.

I am over it now.
     past it
     above it
     beyond it

Have you not beguiled me enough my love?

Am I not servile enough my love?

Have you not defiled me enough my love?


I think,

Yes.



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On Wednesday October 31st, 2007, Karma Doll (254) writes:
yes...everyone owns this one..Love it hun~Mel


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, An Expired Member (8) writes:
Magnificent, i was thrust upward with emotion.-HK


On Saturday August 19th, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (158) writes:
~hits me hard and now i crumble in memories again...Very cool, ill be reading your works man.


On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
I could slap myself for not finding this one sooner! The hurt, pain, anger, regret, sadness...& love- it seeps through every line. Freakin awesome! Julia~


On Tuesday February 7th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1149) writes:
your skin seems almost smeared with charcoal and dipped into ashes that painted the wind in this, along with broken melodies held together by the most thin of guy-strings. i adore how i can always find gems just by going to you profile..


On Tuesday February 7th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1149) writes:
and i know you'll never stop surprising me with your milk-smooth quality of writing. thank you for being you, ron. you are a breath of unspoiled air, a drink of purified water, and someone i truly admire. ♥


On Tuesday February 7th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1149) writes:
by the way, i meant gut-strings. i'm having typing issues today :)


On Saturday January 28th, 2006, missanthropic (48) writes:
Well spoken and simply exquisite.


On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Ainsof (1874) writes:
"sixth, regretful" No Doubt! I love it; a new twist on 'let me count the ways' I ask myself: forgiving or a sucker, I'm both...you? .... cool write.


On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, veingo (593) writes:
yyyyyyyyyyyyup! Thanks.


On Thursday October 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (15) writes:
You can surprise urself by the number of times you can forgive.. and welcome heartache back into your life with open arms... when you'rs in love....


On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:
oh this struck me...i think almost everyone has that one person that they want it to work so badly with but cant ever seem to get it right..and finally have to let it go, or try to...~kristy


On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, Jerrica (124) writes:
Really good write my dear! Awsome structure. I will read more of yours in the future for sure. *J*


On Monday October 10th, 2005, a_deception_unto_myself (25) writes:
*sigh*if it isnt the one thing we all find so easy to relate to...Great write.


On Monday October 10th, 2005, Err0r (571) writes:
Relationships can be wonderful...and most of the time they're crap. Great write.


On Monday October 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:
vaugely familiar, who am i kidding extremly familiar. Very good read! ~Krynn~


On Monday October 10th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1066) writes:
Oh gods...so very very VERY easy to relate to for me...beautiful descriptions...this is wonderful! *Evangel*


On Monday October 10th, 2005, Lab Rat (325) writes:
now if thats not familiar, i don't know what is



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