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Eventualy,

After the stun, and shock of the loss.
Thoughts start to drift away from the searing past.
Through the numbness that is, now.
And into the wrinkled glass, and smoke thick enough to choke dragons.

You wonder what is possable?
What is only fantasy?
And what just may be, your most welcome comfort.

Maybe someone you've known for a long time,
but suddenly seen in a different light.
With whom you've made small-talk over and over.
Then suddenly, they said something meaningful.

You want what you want,
but the world is complicated.
Full of smokescreens, glass ceilings,
and significant others.

It's easier to just get lost in the day by day.
So why hold on to hope for the future?

Because I am certain that once,
we saw each other clearly,
through the wrinkled glass,
and smoke thick enough to choke dragons.





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On Tuesday November 14th, 2006, Mord (47) writes:
Getting lost in the day by day holds sanity sometimes. Nice write I can relate.


On Sunday December 4th, 2005, BloodySparrow (67) writes:
it seems to me that you went through a bit of bad all for a mall glimer of hope, I wonder, are you an optimist?


On Sunday December 4th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:
Good question..................I have no idea.


On Thursday October 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (15) writes:
It is funny how people change, a sweet and sad write.


On Monday October 10th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
love the last line


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, Evil (542) writes:
wow. this was beautiful. metaphorical bliss. you drug me under with your words. it was a pleasure reading this. don't mind if i read more. haha. nicely done.


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, saintedmad (1176) writes:
..intricate last stanza; would that we could see everyone clearly; maybe the unseen would become obsolete? lovely verse ~ness~


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, Angi (15) writes:
i loved it im sure many can relate whether they faded or friend or both but i thought it was a great write and it a great example


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:
It is sad when someone you know becomes someone that you once knew...and to look back at what you had...is one of the most painful emotions ever. This is a beautiful write, as all your other pieces are. Looking forward to the next. *Evangel*


On Sunday October 9th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:
Evangel, you are so sweet. I hope I never disappoint you.*V*



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