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Just be here

Please don't leave.

Don't go searching for gifts

to conjure thanks,

and short-lived smiles.

Give me nothing.

Just be here.

Veingo

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On Tuesday July 25th, 2006, Sin (1636) writes:

i love minimalism when it is done intelligently...no extra words to clutter the message, this was beautiful ~kristy

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, The anarchist (14) writes:

THAT is really good. It contains structure, sense and even kinda own personal touch. Very well done poem.

On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Eric (85) writes:

very simple, but very well written. I really like this. perfect. ^_^

On Sunday November 6th, 2005, Err0r (574) writes:

I'm going to show this to my girlfriend...finally someone can put into words what I've felt all along. Thank you for this write. :)

On Thursday October 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (15) writes:

few words = all that needs to be said

On Saturday October 8th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:

I don't want the stars or the moon...I just want you to stay under them with me. Lovely write. *Evangel*

On Saturday October 8th, 2005, Jerrica (125) writes:

I totally agree with mysticventures, Perfection. :}~ *J*

On Friday October 7th, 2005, mysticventures (546) writes:

I love short writes - and this one was perfect :)

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