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For poets whom I can feel

Feed me with your words.

Speak of

the sweetest fruit

the smoothest cream

the most delicious wine.

Touch me with your breath.

like a cool wind

from the mouth of a deep cave

on summer's hottest day.

Caress me with your thoughts.

Explain the sensation

of drawing near the fire

having come in from the freezing rain.

Heal me.

Inspire me.

Sustain me till the end of time.

Like your words, that live forever.

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On Sunday May 25th, 2008, NikesRain (1474) writes:

♥ needed to see something like this tonight...

On Monday December 31st, 2007, An Expired Member (45) writes:

i want the same. but then again, who doesnt? a poet needs something to feel and that's our biggest need and flaw... loved it. great write awesome read. -mars

On Saturday October 6th, 2007, warmaprylrain (192) writes:

I crave the same thing as you wrote here

On Friday July 13th, 2007, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

these words i feel..........well done

On Wednesday July 11th, 2007, Mylissa (1083) writes:

How did I miss this, sheesh, absolutely perfect. Refreshing as carlos said.

On Monday July 2nd, 2007, saintedmad (1176) writes:

expressed deftly and deciduously, like leaves falling softly upon command. .. amen

On Monday July 2nd, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:

This was spot on. "like a cool wind/from the mouth of a deep cave/on summer's hottest day." A breath of fresh air. -Carl

On Monday July 2nd, 2007, torn_beauty (103) writes:

oooo..that just sank right in to my skin! i have to fav it.

On Monday July 2nd, 2007, Err0r (574) writes:

This is a gorgeous write Ron. We all have so many inspirations, but few really can put into words about inspiration from other poets. Very nice.

On Sunday July 1st, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:

ooooooh...I like this piece. Such an amazing tribute, put into words that could relate to anyone. Excellent, Ron. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

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