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I sighed, it have been a long day
A long hot shower, it’s the only way
To smoothes the soul
Then I’ll be in control

 As I closed the bathroom door,
 I turned on the hot water
My clothes, one by one, on the floor
There’s no such a thing as ‘later’

Naked and cold
Its like I never been told
That shiver down in my spine
Is so divine

I smirked as I got in
Please tell me it’s not a sin
To have goosebumps everywhere
I can’t help it but to stand there

It’s the only time I can think
Please don’t take it away from me
I’ll stand there without a blink
Just let me be

As the hot water becomes warm
I turned the ‘cold’ knob to the right
It became hotter now, it won’t do me a harm
Goosebumps, again, I’d do it all night

I looked down, at my fingers,
Prunes lookin’ - it never gets old
I sighed, its what my body hungers
So I’m staying in, they’ll have to hold

Steams filled in the room
I could hardly breathe
I turned around, trying to find a clear air
To inhale; I won’t be in doom

Time… it doesn’t even in my mind
Who cares how long I’ll stay?
Water bills, don’t remind
I’m not the one to pay

Again, I got my water hotter
It does get better
Eyes closed, my head’s down
It feels so damn good that I’d drown

Being in my world; nothing more I’d ask for
Feeling the hot pressure on my body, my soft skin
A such beautiful thing, something you cannot ignore
I could feel it pulling me in

I opened my eyes I see a soap
‘ah that’s right’ I thought
Its time for me to grope
Maybe getting a little naughty

Wash me there
Rinse me here
A pure satisfaction
With no tension

Ah never felt this love before
No worries, I can do it some more
I smiled as the water runs through my hair
 Then my whole naked sleek body with no one’s to compare

Now I can hardly breathe
I searched the space for the air
‘its time’ I sighed
That is something I cant repair

As I stepped out of the tub
The mirror is all fogged up
I searched for my towel to rub
Shit I need to get warmed up

As I wrapped a towel around me
And opened the door
A cold air came in my way, I grimed
that’s a part that I don’t adore

I ran over to my bedroom and dropped the towel
On the floor
Goosebumps came up my spine from the heat
Feeling such a whore

I jumped into my bed,
Sheets softly covered my exposed body
I laid there unsaid
Curled around, wanting to go to sleep

Just because
I’ve made a good love with shower



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On Tuesday April 8th, 2008, blue (1749) writes:
dirty girl. ;) I too love the escape that a long hot shower provides. It's the one place I can truly think. yupyup. ~b


On Monday June 18th, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:
This is almost like what L7 would sound like if they'd covered Jane's Addiction's "Standing In The Shower...Thinking" Nice! :D -Carl


On Friday January 19th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
ditto markus


On Friday December 15th, 2006, Markus Porkwing (714) writes:
My ex use to use the shower head to make herself happy... it was one of them massasing type, detachable too... crazy women.


On Monday December 18th, 2006, mysterylove (79) writes:
hahaha yes who doesn't?! its the best ;)


On Friday November 10th, 2006, Sealed Identity (17) writes:
this was really good.. I want to take a bath now.


On Friday November 10th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


On Friday November 10th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
heck man!!!!!!!!!!!! Erm....WOW...as a poem it was almost giggly, soapy...as a narrative mindfill...haha...well, I want a shower for different reasons now...hahahahaha!!! Phewwww!!


On Friday November 10th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
Aimee....where are you....?!?!?!?!? I have lotion? HERE KITTY!!!....hehehehehehe


On Friday November 10th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (706) writes:
I really enjoyed, but tripped up on a few parts, lost flow at 8th...12th, you had a pattern, and it got a little twisted, then lost...to be regained again.


On Friday November 10th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (706) writes:
Turn on heater before you get in! Close vent in your bathroom, so it toasty when you get out- or if you have a clothes dryer...warm some more towels...I amy have to write about my shower massage now ;-)


On Thursday November 9th, 2006, dying angel (1340) writes:
lol. lately i've been finding comfort in extremely hot showers.i took 3 today. it's quite addictive.



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