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"She's Only Pretty When She Cries" by CrestfallenTears

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She's only pretty when she cries,
when she finds out all of his lies.
She's only pretty when her heart bleeds,
from the bullshit that he feeds.
When he cheats and he lies,
She's only pretty when her heart dies.
When she sheads tears blue as can be,
She's only pretty when he leaves.
She sits alone to cry, her dying heart he denies.
Because she's only pretty when she cries.


yes, it is quite short, but it's also really personal, so I would have to say this is one of my favorites.



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On Monday December 26th, 2005, veingo (589) writes:
This is tragicly, beautiful. ^V^


On Wednesday October 12th, 2005, GothicBlack (268) writes:
Short but oh so sweat. Almost disturbing... yet still beautiful. ~gothic~


On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:
That's...saddeningly beautiful, if that works. A poem shouldn't be judged on it's length, unless it's something like two letters. Nice work.


On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, Crysa (41) writes:
"She's only pretty when her heart bleeds" this line brings so many different images to mind. :)


On Thursday September 29th, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:
I always heard "Don't cry, you're to pretty to cry" but, I can relate to this piece so well...May be short but it's beautiful!


On Monday September 26th, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:
I dont thinmk im pretty when i cry... but thank god someone is


On Monday September 26th, 2005, cucuio (212) writes:
This is beautiful, or atleast to me... But one thing, I think it's sheds not sheads... If I'm allowed to say that...


On Monday September 26th, 2005, James_the_Saint (131) writes:
I wish I could relate to that girl, I look terrible in distress. Props to you, and props to her.


On Monday September 26th, 2005, An Expired Member (13) writes:
i like this one, i can really relate to the girl... awesome write~ DyInG



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