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"The Forest" by Delphoid-Q

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Beneath a forest dark and green
I hear the sounds of things unseen:
From chittered voice to furtive stir,
From everywhere a rustled fur.

The creatures of this place do guard -
For in each glassy eye there lies a shard
Of that ominous presence which abounds
In every substance that surrounds.

From twixt the boughs all bathed in fog,
From behind each fallen, rotting log
Comes forth the spirit that rules this place;
A spectre as yet without a face.

I feel the thought of Him pervade:
"What do you in my enchanted glade?
You defile this land with human shame,
Return to your world and there remain."

Then reality shifts as if by spells
And I sense the taint of city smells.



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On Friday March 28th, 2008, Circe Avalon (182) writes:
I loved the banishment of the trespasser, very good write. Sounds like something I would write! So...I loved it!


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, The Spiral Downward (387) writes:
All words combine to illustrate, at first, a creature! Only to, by end, reveal the creature is but one of man's normalities! Well Said & Beautifully Written in Dark Macabre!


On Thursday February 17th, 2005, Anth (1611) writes:
i adored this work, beautifully rhymed and assembled, really placed you in the scene with its great descriptions


On Sunday December 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (35) writes:
this one has such a great ending, love the fairy tell feel that punches with environmental force and shows man's growing farce!


On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (158) writes:
I must put this poem on my favourites list. Ever slendid moment I spend in the forest makes me dread the city more and more. I love this piece. Especially love how you give a *wiccan* sort of feel. =-MO-=


On Wednesday December 24th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
Colorful, creative, vivid and interesting...down right excellent!


On Monday December 15th, 2003, purr_verse (1435) writes:
This is wonderful. I love everything about it...so much so I can't think of a comment that doesn't sound banal... Brilliant. purr


On Thursday November 20th, 2003, urbanhumility (1363) writes:
brilliant, you speak for the soul of nature here.....lyrical, with a dark sense of "Poe", you have spoken well here...........urban


On Friday November 14th, 2003, sole (114) writes:
Everything I love in a poem, well done.


On Friday November 7th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
brilliant...from a child of the woodland this means a lot to me there is so much here...


On Saturday July 26th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1801) writes:
Excellent.. Im stunned.. I want to use this in a werewolf game.. Great write. Monkey looking over the forest from the top of a tree..


On Saturday July 26th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
You hereby have the permission of the author to use this piece. Just acknowledge the source, is all.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1801) writes:
and I will.. for sure..


On Saturday July 12th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Well Done Vre... Belting Them Out Like Some Old Man In A Candy Store... Keep It Up And I'll Have To Kill You... Or Maybe Just Buy You A "Twixt"...


On Sunday July 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:
There is unrest in the forest There is trouble with the trees For the maples want more sunlight And the oaks ignore their pleas http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/rush/thetrees.html THE FOREST is deep & full of vivid imagery, and tought, well done


On Thursday June 26th, 2003, Amandasauris rex (72) writes:
Great write. Veryvivid fot my imagination. Full of color for my thoughts. *Kitten*


On Friday June 20th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
I read this before and I thought I commented, but I guess not. Like I said, I find the rhymes excelent, and the description was really cool! ~D


On Monday June 16th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:
Stabs at excellence. ~ mw


On Sunday June 15th, 2003, SeekingNirvana (34) writes:
holy shit. this is very very good. excellent flow and rhyme scheme! great immages with this piece. keep them comming!


On Friday June 20th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
took me right along. good structure, last couplet was very good



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