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e a t e n

little bites
greedy
and
yearning

swing

over
lies
you
provide

and

i

dissect

every
inch
of
your
abstraction

but
maybe
oblivion
has
me
tight

because

i
just
sink in

you

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On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:

i thought the choppiness allowed the reader to add their own visuals inbetween snipets..kinda gave that dissected feel to it and i adore this, great write ~kristy

On Friday September 30th, 2005, Err0r (586) writes:

Very unique. I'm wondering, the choppy effect as BSO stated, was it something you were aiming for? Or just you're normal way of writing things out. Did you want it read that way? Either way. Pretty spiffy.

On Thursday November 10th, 2005, Army Barbie (501) writes:

Don't listen to Err0r, she asks too many questions. =) I thought this was lovely. Spiffy...pssht, like that's a comment! (jk, I love her to pieces.)

On Friday September 30th, 2005, Astra Dei (649) writes:

not bad. kind of choppy. but not bad

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