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Mute

Muzzled Boy.
Gagged Girl.

Close-mouthed love.
Five Stitched Heart.

Unspoken Words.
Soundless Meaning.

Hushed Inspiration.
Sedated Tears.

Muffled Thoughts.
Unexpressed Truths.

Silenced Voices,
Quieter Blades.

Open
....Shut
........Wound

So we can all bleed on mute.

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On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Reefer_rave (220) writes:

It reminds me of halloween too... hushed tones and wary faces. Gives me something to think about the rest of the night (at least).

On Saturday July 7th, 2007, An Expired Member (5) writes:

This brings backs memories of a lost one to me. . .I'm going to have to sit and ponder this. . .

On Wednesday July 4th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

oh yes!! This is more like it....the words seem to convince beyond their liteal meaning...delving into slightly more surreal morphing context...I like this piece very muchski...:)

On Saturday June 30th, 2007, MindRape (862) writes:

"So we can all bleed on mute" .......words my heart has been crying out with laryngitis to say and you put a voice to them...thank you.

On Saturday June 23rd, 2007, Mylissa (1057) writes:

this brings out the exact nature of people, perfectly done.

On Friday June 22nd, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1763) writes:

Short and sweet. I like it lots

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Scarecrow Jack (42) writes:

"So we can all bleed on mute." ...just f'n amazing.

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, mywristshurt (512) writes:

i agree with everyone, it was very well written

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, blue (1754) writes:

ha! Fantastic. So great. ~b

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Army Barbie (487) writes:

Fuck.

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Army Barbie (487) writes:

Hahaha, some clarification for the confused Britt. I meant "fuck"...as in..."fuck! That's fantastico!" Bravo! Yeehaw! Word.

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1048) writes:

"So we cal all bleed on mute." I lubb every line...sooooo amazingly beautiful, the silence of bleeding and truths never said. *sighs* Excellentness, lovely. ~*Beth*~

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Lolita (121) writes:

Woosh issa pretty poem.

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, veingo (586) writes:

:)- ^V^

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Esau (285) writes:

beautiful work here, it rings of a true depiction of life, yet it sticks to reality and masks it with silence.

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, An Expired Member (10) writes:

i like this one...gives a lot of meaning without the whole lot of writing..awesome..and the orange letters reminded me of halloween..lol.

On Thursday June 21st, 2007, elisa (1988) writes:

exhaling sound... faintly leaving lips ..........the inevitable implosion.... loved it.

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