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Maybe
If I had less pride
I could've told you
I felt like dying

And maybe
Just maybe


You could've
Stopped me.


[Maybe one person could change one life...]





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On Friday October 12th, 2007, Esau (281) writes:
last night i heard the very words from my father that i have longed to hear from anyone, and they have changed me, because of that i have more understanding for the last line than ever before.


On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Reefer_rave (228) writes:
This has to go on my favorites, I simply am stunned.


On Monday August 6th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1821) writes:
No doubt about it


On Thursday August 2nd, 2007, Mylissa (1083) writes:
love it...love it and love it some more.


On Thursday August 2nd, 2007, Mistress Shadow (356) writes:
So very true and I agree with Aunty. For me, this is one of those things you realize when your body doesn't let you take it anymore. ~T


On Wednesday August 1st, 2007, dying angel (1340) writes:
very very inspirational.


On Sunday July 29th, 2007, veingo (589) writes:
If only it were easyer to change one's self. Great write, girl. ^V^


On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Freebird (653) writes:
I believe it. Can't tell you how often what you've described has happened


On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (706) writes:
I wonder who has never felt this close. I love how you identify pride. When I feel like I want to die I can not usually admit some kind of hurt or defeat. REALIZING not being alone can make an impact.


On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (706) writes:
Sadly, many can feel alone surrounded by others..sometimes making it worse if around the cruel or indifferent..and many to jump in and hurt the wounded. But ONE can make a difference too.


On Wednesday August 1st, 2007, elisa (2018) writes:
one of the best comments i've ever read.... i completely agree with Aunty..........viable knowledge, destine for wisdom.


On Sunday July 29th, 2007, Army Barbie (499) writes:
You are more than amazing.


On Sunday July 29th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:
*sighs* Yes. One person...CAN...change one life...but they have to be patient, and they have to stay strong through everything that might occur. In the end, though...the real change comes from within. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~



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