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(Before anyone reads this I want to clear something up.
This is not about my boyfriend [ahem...ex-boyfriend] This
Is about a friend who died a few years ago in Iraq, not a
Former lover. Enjoy, I hope hearts break and conformists
Are pissed off.)









I promise I won't break
Just...touch me.
I feel no pain
Just...your essence.
My lips are telling me to throw everything away
For a glimpse of your cold flesh.
My fingers...miss you.













(Shiver)















Let all restraints be the reasons you let everything go.
Defy your strings
They don't want you to succeed.
Touch me
And I'll make you smile.















(Shiver)















Hold me
And I'll make you sing.
Sing to me
And I'll bow down gracefully.

A dance with you.
And the magnolias will play
The violin strings of a wheeping willow
A crying song
That will singal the start of the piano of stars:
The firefly song of goodbye.





















(Shiver)


















Shoeless feet
Move in sinc
Atop freezing grass
A mound of earth...
On holy land.









On the brink of winter more hearts break.










You:
A gladiator
A prince
A piece of art
A chivalrous knight
A lone heart
A fallen tear
A broken mirror
A lost ray of sunshine

Your last moonbeam has faded
And upon it...I never got to see you smile.
Only break at the bad cards in your hand.

I promise I won't break
Just...touch me.
I feel no pain
Just...your essence.
My lips are telling me to throw everything away
For a glimpse of your cold flesh.
My fingers...miss you.















(Shiver)














[Turn off the beautiful mourning beam
Turn on the hate
And place the blame]













(Twitch)

Wrap the American flag
Around your annoying
Wanna-be defiant
Trying to be different
Throwing the finger at conformity
Conformists.

You live here.
You breathe here.
You work here.
You smile here.
All on YOUR OWN terms...
Because of lost warriors
Who stood up
Knocked down threatening souls
And fell themselves.

My best friend
My confidant
The tears in my eyes
All fallen.

Next time you want to defy MY flag
I'll wrap it around my finger
So you can focus your beady little eyes
And glare at the red white and blue
Telling you to FUCK OFF.
 
Read this symphony of a lost friend
And remember how wrong you are.

(Twitch)

















[The mourning beam returns, flooding the hate eulogy]

















(Shiver)




















Dance with me, my ghostly friend
Until the frostbite breaks the willow's limbs
And the magnolia withers.
Until the stars retire from their keys
And all I can hear
Is the lament of a firefly's goodbye.
























You still stand tall
Beneath the flag.



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On Monday June 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (14) writes:
beautiful.


On Thursday May 17th, 2007, me_the_messenger (174) writes:
yes, hearts did break... mine did indeed. you can write. truely amazing. i feel for you. *messenger


On Friday August 18th, 2006, LordBrosnian (65) writes:
you, my dear, are a poet. My god. I joined this site and scowled in self-righteousness besides a few poets. But you, delilah, swing your words with the adamance of a valkyrie!


On Saturday July 22nd, 2006, An Expired Member (18) writes:
Very touching ...and incredibly sad you are a very good writer


On Wednesday May 3rd, 2006, dying angel (1373) writes:
this brought me to tears. im so sorry for your loss and i hope you know hes always watching over you. *tears*


On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Thorn (443) writes:
Holy hell. This ia an incredible write. I think the format really helped the flow and meter, which, combined with the briliance of the words, created an amazing piece. I love it.


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, veingo (552) writes:
OMG I can't belive I missed this. ( Thanks Crono) It's wonderful as always Courtney. You never disapoint. ^V^


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Eric (89) writes:
"Until the stars retire from their keys And all I can hear Is the lament of a firefly's goodbye". Wow, what a stunning write. This is really incredible. I loved the whole thing!


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Michelle Xiao (518) writes:
I can't breathe or swallow at the end of this. Words cannot touch this haunting magnificence.


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, Solitary Dreamer (29) writes:
*shiver*...he would have liked it, I know I do..thankyou for this truly wonderfull piece..it's nice to see sombody who appreciates what we do.


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, LostInDespair (197) writes:
-tely epic. Thank you. ~Lost~


On Saturday November 26th, 2005, LostInDespair (197) writes:
What can be said about this really? You have captured something truly grand in this piece. You honor your friends memory and that of every american who laid down their life for something they believed in. This is heartbreaking, breathtaking, and absolu


On Friday November 25th, 2005, Err0r (586) writes:
I hate Iraq. I hate bush, but our soldiers all stand tall to take that leap of faith for our country...or for bush that bastard. Very nice write my friend.


On Friday November 25th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1164) writes:
god, this is touching..i felt the shivers, deep inside, and it almost tore. "Dance with me, my ghostly friend Until the frostbite breaks the willow's limbs And the magnolia withers." your ability to create feelings from words always astounds me.


On Friday November 25th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1093) writes:
*shivers violently* I HATE SHIVERS!!! And yet, in this form, I love them...this is so very wonderful, and so very heart ripping...another powerful write from a beautiful soul. *Shivers again*. *Evangel*


On Friday November 25th, 2005, suicideseason (2161) writes:
Oh man...so intricate...soft and beautiful...there is just nothing that I can say.


On Friday November 25th, 2005, AniDayz (1297) writes:
'(Shiver)'...damms. intense, powerful --beyond any explanation i can conjuer up...'(Shiver)'...i am...



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