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It's six a.m.
For some reason
I've got a hangover.
It feels like you.
I smell your shampoo...
On my pillow.
(Secretly, I take a moment
To smell you with a smile)
And your cologne
Has been washed over my sheets.
(Again, you have me sighing.)
You're my beautiful hangover.
The soft way you whisper
In my ear
Vibrates inside my head
107 times louder
Than you know how to talk.
And it's still a song
I would die to ear.
(Even if I know
The headache would be hell)
Your tongue is making me...
sick
Simply because
Of the left over alcohol.
But I continue to drink your kiss
Because
Tasting you makes me squirm
Beneath your demanding hands.
Waking up beside you
Is always as exciting
As going to bed wth you
The previous night.
Our last morning
Shall be more grand
Because goodbye sex
Is always better
Than everyday sex.
(You better make me feel you for the next two years.)



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On Saturday May 12th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:
this was beautiful in a soft aching way..light and sensual with a sad little smile at the end...lovely write Courtneykins ~kristy


On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, An Expired Member (44) writes:
:] This was really good:} I enjoyed it.


On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Evil_Live (114) writes:
I'm with edenscancer, beautiful poem by a beautiful girl!


On Saturday March 10th, 2007, Winter Born (168) writes:
I'm gonna second Lordshadow on this one.


On Monday November 13th, 2006, edenscancer (41) writes:
to be loved by a woman like this, is a beautiful thing. beautiful poem. beautiful girl. lucky man.


On Monday December 12th, 2005, lordshadow (209) writes:
god damn... I don't know why I never read your work before.


On Saturday October 22nd, 2005, Sticky Kitty (329) writes:
*sighs* how lovely -kitty


On Saturday October 15th, 2005, coldheartedbiatch (14) writes:
beautiful, so true it is just beautiful.


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, vaultgrl (239) writes:
great write...have to agree with evil...."i continue to drink your kiss"....beautiful


On Monday September 12th, 2005, Esau (281) writes:
wow. i like this one, i really do. even though it's a cliche, i feel all warm and tingly inside.


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, Just a Rose (34) writes:
wonderful! i absolutley love this piece.like evil said the way your brought those three together "your my beautiful hangover" great!


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, Gideon Lost (194) writes:
This was a wonderful and beautiful piece. The last line was the best for me. -Gideon


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, Evil (552) writes:
wow.. this was really good. the way you intertwined drinking, sex, and love is astounding. you've conveyed hangover love so well. nicely done.



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