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Failing



Take me
Beat me
Strike me hard
For I deserve it
For failing like a ‘tard



Torture me
Hang me
Till the end
For I deserve it
Failing to be your true friend

Take me
Beat me
Strike me harder
For I am nothing
That could be a martyr




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On Saturday January 26th, 2008, Zen (670) writes:
eh.. let it go, everybody fucks up sometime..


On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Lolita (89) writes:
I like the last stanza best.


On Thursday May 24th, 2007, sIo (901) writes:
this is sad....you should love yourself more because there are many people that already do...


On Thursday February 15th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1203) writes:
this was hot for some reason, though i dont know if that is what you were trying to get across, i loved it!


On Thursday February 1st, 2007, Fornever_Never (265) writes:
Adam I am so upset that you would think this of your self .. but we all have are times when down is low and up and is high .. and during those times we find out who are true friends are


On Thursday February 1st, 2007, Fornever_Never (265) writes:
Everything means nothing in the end .. and with saying that I mean everything that you say now .. will mean nothing tomorrow when you find out you are better then this .. I am sorry that you had to go through that .. but I am always here for you ~T~


On Wednesday January 31st, 2007, Bridge (420) writes:
damn..u've certainly grown in your writing.


On Wednesday January 31st, 2007, Mylissa (1157) writes:
wow...simply wow.


On Wednesday January 31st, 2007, The Fool (1076) writes:
I think in all honesty this was incredible, I can feel the emotions you wanted to progress through each word.. It saddened me..



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