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What you were



You were, perfect, beautiful, and always nice
Now you’re a bitch, a witch, and cold as ice

You were an inspiration, a dream and my reason to live
Now you’re a fear, a cry and my reason to die

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I loved you but I can’t any more




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On Saturday January 26th, 2008, Zen (670) writes:
that bitch, lol.


On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Vexed (107) writes:
I like this place, the colours are nice and the poem is well written... but most girls can be like that, even a good chunk of guys too... my fave line was "you're a bitch, a witch, and cold as ice"


On Monday January 2nd, 2006, Darkest_Addiction (54) writes:
"Now you’re a fear, a cry and my reason to die" this is an amazing line, it was perfect


On Sunday January 1st, 2006, sIo (901) writes:
wow that's harsh.


On Thursday December 29th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (478) writes:
i've friends..of both sexes..that i could say this 2..this is an awesome write adam..sorry i havent commented on anything..but i hope you do know that i read and dont always comment... -Kel


On Thursday December 29th, 2005, Adaml (243) writes:
As do I and I dont exspect(sp) comments on everything


On Sunday December 4th, 2005, Vexed (107) writes:
hehe, I know several guys who have gone through a relationship like that with one of my friends, hehe, sums it all up really neatly.


On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, ShardsofSilence (355) writes:
very clear and concise in such few lines that i can totally relate to ^^. hehe great job. i like :)


On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, Bridge (420) writes:
this is powerful stuff, u kno tha right? good job


On Friday December 2nd, 2005, vaultgrl (239) writes:
....very powerful write adam....it shows your pain and hurt....keep it up...this new side of your writing is new, but really good....


On Friday January 20th, 2006, vaultgrl (239) writes:
....and i'm sorry to find that i was the one to inspire your pain....wish i had known......i'm so sorry...allthough i know words can't make up for the way i've made you feel,.....


On Saturday January 21st, 2006, Adaml (243) writes:
always remember that while i was "in pain then" what you have done for me...You were, perfect, beautiful, and always nice.... You were an inspiration, a dream and my reason to live... that is what you are to me, even when i try to hate you i cant do it


On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (633) writes:
*you were an inspiration, a dream and a rare beauty, now you're a fear, a cry, and just so damn ugly*, that's how i would write the second verse, i like it how it is thought so up to you


On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, ShardsofSilence (355) writes:
either way it still sounds good :D


On Sunday January 1st, 2006, Adaml (243) writes:
And i do know that "cold as ice should not be used..." but it fit...



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