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Submissive to you *



Submissive to you

Never has anyone seen this part of me

I lay here dreaming, dreaming that you could control me

I am a nice, assertive, and humble person, what could possibly be wrong with me?

Some say I am obsessed with you,

Some say I love you,

Well they’re right I would stop at nothing to please you

I would do anything for you,

Go anywhere to be with you,

Not even God could hide you


Well maybe nothing is wrong with me

I know, society just has it in for me…

But still your pleasure gives me my only glory

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Me, submissive? Only to you, my mistress



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On Monday January 14th, 2008, Distorted_Reality (169) writes:
This was truly beautiful, it almost played a song in my head :)


On Sunday March 25th, 2007, An Expired Member (16) writes:
Wonderful!


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Mylissa (1157) writes:
Dom/submission...lovely.


On Sunday January 28th, 2007, Adaml (243) writes:
Thank you very much, This one my favorite ones (That I have done)


On Wednesday May 24th, 2006, PoeticHellion (258) writes:
Fabulous.


On Thursday May 18th, 2006, The Fool (1076) writes:
This was just wow, I loved it, it gave me a woozy feeling like I was drinking, and I couldn't stop. This was full of all the right emotions and just made me break


On Sunday January 1st, 2006, Darkest_Addiction (54) writes:
ok iv read this a couple of times and i like it more each time. i think this is my favorite of all of yours my sexy man whore ;)


On Saturday January 21st, 2006, Adaml (243) writes:
thank you very much Erin


On Sunday January 1st, 2006, sIo (901) writes:
ah, i like this ;). you're a rather good writer :)


On Thursday March 30th, 2006, Adaml (243) writes:
nothing like you. if im part good your amazing :)


On Thursday December 29th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (478) writes:
wow..this "mistress" would be one lucky chica...but anyway...another great write..i myself have never felt this way..well..i did..but that dun count..but anway..its awesome..-Kel


On Sunday December 4th, 2005, Vexed (107) writes:
wow, how interesting...it would probably be nice for the person you wrote it about...


On Sunday December 4th, 2005, Adaml (243) writes:
too bad she will never know... unless she some day askes me to do something that i would not do for anyone else... but i think the person knows i do but not the extent that i would go for her :)


On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, ShardsofSilence (355) writes:
o0h i like i like ;D it all flows together so perfectly! bloody brilliant work ^__^


On Thursday November 17th, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (633) writes:
nice, i love the lil twists and turns, nut God is capital G when meaning the one true God, if that matters to you or not, keep up the good work


On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Adaml (243) writes:
It has been fixed :)


On Thursday November 17th, 2005, vaultgrl (239) writes:
...wow adam, i can't beleive i had to beg you to post this......it's great, i love the last line...it's a different style for you, and i can't wait to see more of it...keep it up adam....*wonders who mistress is while walking away*...


On Tuesday November 15th, 2005, Bridge (420) writes:
wow...u have grown. this was REALLY good. i am impressed. *applauds*


On Tuesday November 15th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1116) writes:
Awwww...*swoons on her feet* How sweet...I wish I had someone this bent-up over me...beautiful write Adam. *Evangel*


On Tuesday November 15th, 2005, ApathysKiss (472) writes:
hmm this was actually nice...sing-song like...i could play this with mah guitar, but that'd be stealing. ~m~



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