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Please, o Please



I started a new English class today and the teacher held up a tennis ball and told us to write about the ball, she also mentioned that she bought it for her dog... it actually said "pet shop" on the other side it. so this is what i wrote, no edits, we had 8 min.






As I sit Wagging my tail
Just thinking about it makes me wail
Yellow, White, Full of fun
Makes me want to go for a run
Panting, chasing, bring it back
God I hope my owner buys a pack!
Racket, net, over a wall
Please, o Please just gimme the ball!



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On Saturday December 22nd, 2007, italianbella (330) writes:
that was a very cute litle poem catchy...:)


On Sunday December 2nd, 2007, Caliraphy (195) writes:
Cool, nice little poem, every dog's dream, a nice bouncy ball...-Cali


On Friday November 30th, 2007, unspeakable truth (162) writes:
Put a smile on my face...


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, SilentStalker (1308) writes:
...this should be dedicated to Max...


On Thursday December 6th, 2007, Adaml (243) writes:
Max does not read my stuff. :( but hey i know one of his... um... friends do, right Jo.


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Inevitability (645) writes:
Bad dog. No cookie. No ball. Go sit on the mat.


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Mab (1061) writes:
this is sweet! you deserve a cookie ;)


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Velvet_Raventon (657) writes:
I love it! I would have written something totally boring. Hah! ~V.


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Bridge (420) writes:
haha..yeah. it's cute :)


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, NikesRain (1458) writes:
hahaha, for 8 minutes i think it's outstanding and definitely gets its point across... nicely done


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Sketso (343) writes:
HAR! I can see those words running through my wee jack russel's mind now, followed by a "THROW THE DAMN BALL! MAN! THROW THE DAMN BALL!"


On Thursday November 29th, 2007, Distorted_Reality (169) writes:
haha well not bad for the topic, and only having 8 min...nice ^_^



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