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"Did it hurt?"
...
        "Don't say it" she warns.
(here it comes)
..."when you fell from heaven?"
The highest rate per hour
couldn't conceal the knife pierced
disdain from her eyes.
A slight tilt
and expansion of her pupils
divesting her facade,
as irises tint crimson.
        whispers "Heaven is not where I reign..."
Laughing. he strolls away.

*enticing little man...
So oblivious...*

Line after line,
he blurts as he passes.
Each attempt met with
a cool smile.

At 11th strike
she leaves to her car...
paying no mind to
the eyes baring into her back...

.
.
.
.
.
A thrice, knock
knocking at his door.
Sluggish in drowsy partial-sleep
be creaks it open.
Blasted by
glacial winds...
instantly freezing
every pore,
bone and vein
throughout his entire being.

No person to claim the knock.
No body in this hallway.

Seconds passing,
as he attempts to
regain control.
To just. move!

Finally turning back into
his hotel room.
3:00am the clock reminds.
Laying down in bed;
shaking the events.
Curling into the blankets
to thaw his iced body.

Staring into the darkness,
and suddenly bright,
glowing scarlet eyes bare
into his.
Startled! trying to move...
Paralysis has consumed him.
Helpless. Completely.

She lightens the room
a bit.
Basking in treats to come.
As she unrobes,
keeping his attention...

Perfect in form.
demonic in nature
A creature of mystery
with sinister yearnings.

Wearing only her skin now,
straddling this aroused,
yet terrified human.
Slowly she leans down.
Closing in...
to his ear.

With 5 voices
and a hissing undertone,
again she whispers...

...
"On this night.
dark as the dead. with
only muffled air and solid walls
to mock. your pleas.
I have but one request.

...scream."



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On Monday August 11th, 2008, Wolfaerie (136) writes:
I think I am going crazy cause I could have sworn I posted a comment. Anyway, abolutely intoxicating and seductive.


On Monday August 11th, 2008, Wolfaerie (136) writes:
AND, the language you use sucks the reader right in. I felt like the images were dancing in front of me. Indeed a woman to die for ;)


On Tuesday July 1st, 2008, wilted (303) writes:
An absolutely wonderful work that twisted this way and that, keeping me clinging to every word. Thrilling. And kudos on the excellent vocabulary.


On Monday June 9th, 2008, downstream (103) writes:
kept me clinging on to each coming word, beautiful crimson fluency and a pleasantly sharp ending. Wonderful work (and thank you for the welcome to DP!) It's a pleasure to be able to read your work ~Downstream~


On Monday June 2nd, 2008, An Expired Member (2) writes:
omg. that was awesome. ^_^ kudos on the writing. thnx fer the comments.


On Wednesday May 28th, 2008, An Expired Member (31) writes:
Incredible write....erotic....animalistic yet humane.


On Tuesday May 27th, 2008, Esau (279) writes:
Yes, yes, yes, yes, fucking yes! Now that just pulled me along and WHAM! That last stanza and final verse, damn, amazing. I felt the cold and I felt the comfort of being back bed, and then the fear and excitement. Awesome.


On Sunday May 25th, 2008, Chaos God (83) writes:
Oh My Fucking God This Is Hot. It Sent Shivers Up My Spine, Thanks For The Read!


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, Sketso (543) writes:
I just wonder, would it have been his "pleas" or his "please". HA! Amusing and chilling all at once.


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, fallen (291) writes:
Kinky...LOL, me likes :) I love the way the tension builds up and the way you delivered the last part. Ice cold yet blazing hot.


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, After hours (562) writes:
Strap me in baby, i'm up for some demonic sex, I think the 'exorcist scene' said it best "fuck me...fuck me"...and i'll scream... if you do too. - hmmm feel like some pop corn now...enjoyed;)


On Thursday May 22nd, 2008, Fantecstasy (93) writes:
In-*expletive*-credible. I haven't read something that has appealed this much to me on here in a while. *Tips hat twice*



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