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Blurred Stupidity

Linking myself down
in the soggy
grime filled
gutters.
I hesitate.

Such a firm, strong believer
to be yourself and fuck
everyone else.
Now with age comes
uncertainty?

This sudden empty
critique has left me.
scribbling away thoughts
and
deleting rows.

If my pen. were a microphone,
and my words. my voice.
Then........I am a mute.
Damn pen ran out of ink.

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On Tuesday May 27th, 2008, Esau (281) writes:

I'm definitely in tune with the last bit, that's why i use a mechanical pencil and carry a extra lead in my pocket.

On Tuesday May 27th, 2008, RubyXero (458) writes:

HA!... maybe i'll convert. :)

On Monday May 26th, 2008, Syringe (73) writes:

nicely done. i like the 2nd stanza

On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, Chaos God (86) writes:

Lovin The End Here Dear...

On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, fallen (301) writes:

You'll find the words, they never really leave. They linger, they change, they dance around you but they're there. An interesting way to express uncertainty.

On Thursday May 15th, 2008, After hours (571) writes:

I know exactly what you wrote, said, and meant..very real, very nice.

On Thursday May 15th, 2008, elisa (2018) writes:

vocal depletion ... a hard recovery indeed. nicely done

On Wednesday May 14th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (428) writes:

Nice write. This--"This sudden empty critique has left me. scribbling away thoughts and deleting rows." i love

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