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"daddy's poker friends" by froG_pRinceSs

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she sits in the big bay window of her bedroom
in hopes that daddy's poker friends won't come today

but she sees them pull up the long drive
and hopes, "please God, don't let them come in," she prays

but they come in and bring their beer
and she knows they're here to stay

and her tiny body weeps that night
as her daddy's friends deal cards and play

she knows she won't be alone tonite;
nights like these she never is.

she'll have company in her bed;
she knows it will be his

© froG_pRinceSs 1999




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On Friday May 2nd, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1847) writes:
the title gave it all away. good one tho


On Monday February 18th, 2008, An Expired Member (50) writes:
That gave m e goosbumps! good job on this thou


On Saturday November 10th, 2007, Geisha (772) writes:
That is so fucked up... Awesome write.-Airi


On Tuesday January 9th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:
wow sound like my life story. but its verry good


On Tuesday January 9th, 2007, Instant Insanity (755) writes:
wow, Quite Sad. Is it true? ][ ][


On Tuesday August 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:
Twisted ~Punk~


On Tuesday June 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
beautiful in a scary kind of way nice work xxx


On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (69) writes:
wow... sad but wonderful. *Raven*


On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:
I think it's beautiful in thought but simple in words.


On Thursday January 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:
This is very good.. very sad.. but very good. Although, it brings back some memories that I don't particularly like... :) --beautiful


On Monday December 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (31) writes:
i... relate... alot. too many memories are stirred by this


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, Dark_Specter (17) writes:
that is a insanely good write...but insanely sad


On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:
Reminds me of a few things... Very sad write... intense and emotional.. -JiNx(ie)


On Monday September 20th, 2004, Markus Porkwing (714) writes:
Very disturbing write. Though that is why I like it, if it makes me cringe, then it has done it's job.


On Monday July 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (27) writes:
nice. now write about how she kills the dad and gets away with it...


On Sunday June 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (20) writes:
=( wow,, thats..... well ... wut can i say....beautifly sad


On Sunday May 30th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
wow this is painfully sad....~ss


On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1847) writes:
shit.. I agree with the others. but other then that I would like to say that the whole content and structure of this poem is superp. monkey...


On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
i know the last thing you would need if this is true is for me to say im so sorry...all in all you must be strong and tell someone. in the long run you will make the right choice. however...i wont assume this is from experience. if it isnt this was a very


On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
intense piece. and you are quite the poet for being able to put yourself into someones elses shoes to play such a role as this. nicely done.


On Tuesday June 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:
This makes me think of a book I just finished called "Laura" ... If this is based on personal experience, I am so sorry. Your flow is fantastic though; it sounds like a child's voice, so innocent yet not.


On Monday June 9th, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
The ending for this poem was perfect...it wrapped up the whole poem so, very nicely...Great write...I mean really, Great write!


On Saturday May 3rd, 2003, blackdarkness (311) writes:
wow.. alot of strength in that poem good job


On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:
Omg. i am really sorry. Its a terrific poem. but if its based on experience on your part or on someone elses tell somebody please!


On Saturday May 3rd, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (345) writes:
I'm really really sorry if this is based on experience... Great poem though. I really like it... I'm adding it to my favorites.


On Monday May 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (34) writes:
I'm sorry if this is based on experience too, but this is an absolutely incredible write- good job!


On Friday May 16th, 2003, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
I agree with evreyone if it's real i'm sorry and please tell someone but of course this is still a great poem



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