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If I die tonight I want you to know
I'll never regret the fights that we've battled
And the sadness we've shown

The hurting words and the biting silence
Would scratch but never scar
The pain only came from the times we left ourselves apart

Someday you may see what I see, I'd rather cry from thoughts of you
Rather than not knowing what I don't have
But I do

I do know love will bring many pains
But I can see it only for its gains

It maybe right for me
Come in sight of me

Come and feel what I feel for you



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On Wednesday August 10th, 2005, Invader Lyn (57) writes:
Was this written by me, to you?


On Friday June 17th, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:
very beautiful. loved it.


On Saturday December 18th, 2004, Sin (1639) writes:
you write with such gentle grace, its very touching and refreshing..the last line held such emotion for me it was like watching you bare your soul *kicks self for not reading you sooner*


On Thursday October 9th, 2003, IceDragoness (251) writes:
this is very beautiful, I agree but it makes me sad because i can relate so well but i'll think about that later because my heart's broken at the moment, thank you for your comments, and when i get a chance i'll try meditation like you suggested ~Dawn


On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, alone (199) writes:
BEAUTIFUL write....amazing!


On Wednesday June 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:
very great work i feel you all the way...keep it up -nikky


On Monday June 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (31) writes:
I love the idea this poem puts across...kinda a dont cry because its over, be happy that it happened thing going on. (oo more then 2 words) -GOD


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
how can i not relate to this?...feel you all the way through baby!


On Monday April 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (37) writes:
me likey..great job..i love your pic of davey--my dream boyfriend --melorra


On Friday April 11th, 2003, Velvet_Raventon (702) writes:
So true, and so beautiful! "I do know love will bring many pains / But I can see it only for its gains" These 2 sentences say so much in so little! It is really a brilliant work! Velvet.


On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, Twilight (2103) writes:
i agree. they say som mamy emotions in so little words. very good work. and i shall read ore of your work.


On Tuesday January 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:
I liked this a lot. Looking back on fighting and hurt, but not regretting it and feeling the love more. It's far more realistic than many "I fucking hate you" poems. Keep it up. ~Illiana~


On Tuesday January 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:
Okay, correction on mine: It's far more realistic than THE "I.. and so forth.



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