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"The Hidden Pond" by Midnight Phoenix

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A misty fog rolls off the hidden pond as I sit at the broken docks
Where my naked feet may sway
To look above is to see the arms of trees and I pull the storm clouds
Over my head, I find it safer this way

The water is still and filled with bones
It's tragic but so beautiful
I remain still and wait alone
To find the magic oh so beautiful

The heavy clouds fall into the pond as I sit at the broken docks
Where my naked feet may sway
To look above is to see the rain fall down upon the trees
Then I close my eyes, close my eyes and sleep




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On Saturday June 16th, 2007, torn_beauty (103) writes:
I loved the imagery so much. you have a nice sense of voice and it flowed wonderfully


On Saturday December 10th, 2005, the dried flower (82) writes:
i love the use of a good snap shot...i got a beautiful mental picture from your poem...(it's very cool)


On Thursday July 10th, 2003, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
i love your embrace of nature, i too cannot seperate "this" nature from my soul, your words do much, your written voice has humility, and awe for nature....beautiful......urban


On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, alone (199) writes:
Very well done...you r very talented!


On Wednesday June 4th, 2003, Twilight (2102) writes:
love the second stanza. very well done again...you make me want to be at that place at this very moment.



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