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Voice of The Whisperer

Clouds and open windows so soothing like a frozen lake to a
Path of glitter reflecting thoughts held in the sun’s hand.
So ambient and lustrous the sands, but are they for me?
Like the passing of a lantern in midnight eye
She dims slowly and waits for her next arrival.

Staring at the endless stream of dust I find her waiting
Like a dream waiting to be lived, waiting to be seen.
So unnatural and beautiful, but is this for me?
Violet hues and moonlit paintings so dramatic
As the ink bleeds and a thousand words are hushed
We wait in silence while a single voice whispers an answer.

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On Thursday April 19th, 2007, torn_beauty (104) writes:

this painted a picture in my head that I hope to keep. stunning. and to think I just stumbled across your work. I guess I need to read alot more!

On Sunday December 25th, 2005, weyvern (104) writes:

worthy of a pro well done!

On Sunday December 18th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

..theres not much i can say to this that hasnt already been said...beautifully portrayed ~kristy

On Thursday July 8th, 2004, nesbia (22) writes:

i'm speechless

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

nice, beautiful flow.~~~Grave

On Thursday November 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:

amazing, it is so beautiful. you have a gift for painting beautiful images into my mind with only words... that's rare. i can't wait to read more!

On Tuesday October 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (29) writes:

beautiful work, simply beautiful, and it flows so well, you truely are amazing

On Saturday October 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (43) writes:

oh wow...i like this a lot.Its so enchanting,u have such a way with words.Lovely piece,almost elegant...Dusky..xxx...

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1859) writes:

I wanted more, but then I did think that was the point.. and if thats the case you did it perfect.. other that that it's words of beauty and poetry finely put together.. Im amazed. Peter

On Monday October 6th, 2003, urbanhumility (1332) writes:

beautifuly articulate, always having reverance for nature, your words an potent eatheral feel.............well done my friend..........urban

On Saturday August 16th, 2003, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:

i like this one......keep up the good work.....~Saint_Reaper~

On Monday August 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

this is rediculous... thats all i can say to this peom.. rediculous

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1859) writes:

so productive... nice explanation to your point of wiew.. Peter

On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, anathema (62) writes:

ink bleeds... that it does, and what beautiful blood it is. great write.

On Tuesday June 10th, 2003, manywalks (952) writes:

The title makes me want to think of a Lovecraft piece; but the beauty of this shatters the silence this describes. ~ mw

On Monday May 26th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:

I feel overwhelmed by all the soft, flowing description that takes place in this work. Beautiful, warming...candescent really. Well done.~DW~

On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, Twilight (2104) writes:

i love the way that you use words. its almost enchanting. davey havok kicks ass!!! big j.lo ass!!!!!!

On Thursday April 17th, 2003, alone (199) writes:

Aazing another fellow minnesotan that can write ..keep it up!

On Monday April 14th, 2003, Wester (23) writes:

Man, I've run out of comments. Reading this work I can tell you're a promising new talent and I look very foward to reading more from you, we have very similar writing styles.

On Monday April 14th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

I agree completely with Wester.

On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, Armand (73) writes:

your words flow masterfully like an artist's paintbrush against a canvas. yet i am distracted by a gentle cross breeze produced by the dramatic images. this is a teaser piece, for you've left me wanting to taste a few more beautiful images. bravo.

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