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(My lyrics are almost always just a scratch version, so feel free to give me ideas!)

Waking up scorched and diseased
This burning heart bleeds fantasy
A dream in life in dormant soul
It pulls so hard you can’t control

And so it feels like falling snow
Underneath your wings so cold
But then you see the world below
And I can’t help but think that it’s worth it, forgive me

Falling down through misty air
Still burning up in atmosphere
Strength in disguise as frozen tears
Those fiery wings won’t fail you here

And so it feels like falling snow
Underneath your wings so cold
But then you see the world below
And I can’t help but think that it’s worth it, forgive me

Perched on top the edge of clouds
So quiet you can barely hear the sounds
Of those who screamed at you to fall
A pleasure to know you lost them all

And so it feels like falling snow
Underneath your wings so cold
But then you see the world below
And I can’t help but think that it’s worth it, forgive me



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On Wednesday June 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (73) writes:
well i think you just put some minor touches and you have a great song out of it..


On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Twilight (2082) writes:
the title is cool. i think its fits te piece well without being a part of it if you know what i mean..probably not but either way."Perched on top the edge of clouds" a beautiful picture from the top of the world. well done.


On Monday March 1st, 2004, flying_fox (763) writes:
This is a great song! Would love to hear it with the music...no suggestions to me, I think it's excellent as is. FF


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (592) writes:
I like it, wonderful name for it too ;)


On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
Perfectly captured...it has so much depth and true poetry to it that it makes a hell of a song. Edgy and rock material...just awesome.


On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
Beautiful my friend, sadly beautiful.~~~Grave


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, DoctorAsh (502) writes:
Hmmm... i definetly would't want to suggest any idea's on this one chief. For it seems it was perfectly concieved.. [D&A]


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
I never understand your disclaimers. This is amazingly beautiful. A haunting sound with words put together perfectly. I loved it from the first word...to the last.


On Thursday February 26th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (966) writes:
I agree, every time you start a write with a disclaimer I know it's going to be gold. ~Ship!


On Monday February 23rd, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (966) writes:
The third verse of this is awsome, as was the rest. This has a very triumphant feel to it but also a sense that the battle was won at a heavy cost. ~Ship!



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