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The Waiting Room

(another experimental piece. how fun!)

Waiting for a vision
               Waiting for a voice
       Waiting for a decision
                    Waiting for a choice
   Waiting for a thought
          Waiting for a hand
                      Waiting for a shot
      Waiting for a plan
  Waiting for a meeting
              Hope it's coming soon
        Waiting for an hour
                 In the waiting room

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On Friday November 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (56) writes:

Awsum, cartoon character. Nice experiment.

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, frost bite (47) writes:

hoowwww perdy! so is you really like finding nemo? how fun it was such a great movie! Im glad you liked it so much! the movie finding nemo that is. ya know, the one with the fish in it!! yay for little clown fish! *dork face*

On Friday February 20th, 2004, Twilight (2082) writes:

wow this did flow quite well. very quick and to the point but i didnt miss a beat, well done nemo.

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, myscreamsilenced (5) writes:

Wow, I really liked that, it flows so smoothly, even though short it's to the point. Good job.

On Wednesday February 18th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:

Vary nice, flows great.~~~Grave

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